Going down to Grandpas.
Nalver Th on Aug. 30, 2006
This comic's a bit empty … who cares,
Yeah and i made the changes to size and shading and stuff…… In the next comics , Luffio will be talking to Oak,Luffio will have his first ,and quick, battle and meet someone called Leo!
Nalver Th at 8:16AM, Sept. 3, 2006
-.o Lewis says he nicked it from a copper. then he has it on the table..
KevinClifford at 12:27PM, Sept. 1, 2006
I just noticed something on the last page... You have a cop in the 3rd panel, and a youngster in the 4th... FUCK THE WHAT?! (o.0)
KevinClifford at 12:25PM, Sept. 1, 2006
I chose to not rate. As a rep. of SCP, I follow what the owner does, and he says that if he doesn't rate his suggestions for improvement are heard, and listened too... And yay! You listened to me! You shaded and re-sized! Fucking-A man! I suggest to do what that guy said... The boxes and tails should be connected. And... There's a black pixel next to Oak... I'm not sure, but around that place the BG is also messed up. I also suggest to make panels... There are no borders, anywhere... And if those things are supposed to be them, then the panels aren't even, at all... Those lines have different thicknesses under each panel! :O
Nalver Th at 2:03PM, Aug. 31, 2006
Thanks for the tips... Your the first one whos rated.... thank you...
Lords_of_Darkness at 1:35PM, Aug. 31, 2006
tightin up text boxes and make it to where the tail and the box are on it the same. and it might just be a person deal, but i suggest not leaving open ended talks as in frame 2