1: You resize the maps wrong, use 200,300 ect
2: Fix your Grammar
3: Don't bixmix it makes the comic look not good
4: Fix your effects, don't just make a line come from the guy's crotch, use the line tool instead of the brush.
5: Update only once a day otherwise a lot of people won't see all the updates.
6: Fix the text bubbles, instead of using the sprites body in it use a tail also the sprite is not fully in the text bubble.
7: Fix your paneling
Bitmixing is when you use maps from one generation and sprites from another...
for example, backgrounds from Gen 3 games (on the GBA) with sprites from generation 4 (NDS)
Ignore anonymous, they're just a pussy who doesn't want anyone to know who they are. Please, don't bit-mix, use gen. IV backgrounds, it'll be better; trust me.
squirtle is comming from his crotch -.-"
but other than that this comic looks pretty good so far.
just make sure you take into account what PKNESS said on the last page, bitmixing is bad!
chaosflame24 at 5:10PM, Sept. 30, 2010
You spelled bkac wrong.
darkpower101010 at 8:23PM, Sept. 23, 2010
I think that Anonymous speaks for all of us.
anonymous at 2:38PM, Sept. 20, 2010
> My face when last panel [img]http://i56.tinypic.com/1567moh.jpg[/img]
Ettie at 7:44PM, Sept. 9, 2010
Not a bad page! Keep up the good work, and make sure to take the constructive criticism others give towards your comic.
zt2maniac at 8:17PM, Sept. 3, 2010
1: You resize the maps wrong, use 200,300 ect 2: Fix your Grammar 3: Don't bixmix it makes the comic look not good 4: Fix your effects, don't just make a line come from the guy's crotch, use the line tool instead of the brush. 5: Update only once a day otherwise a lot of people won't see all the updates. 6: Fix the text bubbles, instead of using the sprites body in it use a tail also the sprite is not fully in the text bubble. 7: Fix your paneling
ozzy1181 at 4:50PM, Sept. 3, 2010
Bitmixing is when you use maps from one generation and sprites from another... for example, backgrounds from Gen 3 games (on the GBA) with sprites from generation 4 (NDS)
Kris1 at 4:33PM, Sept. 3, 2010
It's not coming from his CROTCH!! >:( I dont understand what is bit mxing don't they all use similar graphics?
Taco5 at 4:10PM, Sept. 3, 2010
Ignore anonymous, they're just a pussy who doesn't want anyone to know who they are. Please, don't bit-mix, use gen. IV backgrounds, it'll be better; trust me.
Snowninja at 4:01PM, Sept. 3, 2010
lol! Good page, dude!
JShark at 4:00PM, Sept. 3, 2010
squirtle is comming from his crotch -.-" but other than that this comic looks pretty good so far. just make sure you take into account what PKNESS said on the last page, bitmixing is bad!
Kris1 at 3:58PM, Sept. 3, 2010
What?
anonymous at 3:50PM, Sept. 3, 2010
Dude wtf. Is with the last panel!!!