skitty at 10:32PM, Feb. 23, 2007

I know XD I accidentally drew too much over. Thank you for the comment ^^

Tabby_Cat at 9:49PM, Feb. 21, 2007

by the way i love the *le gasp!*, can't remember where i've heard it before, 'twas a long time ago. i only just barely noticed the 3 folder holder holes along the side XD

Tabby_Cat at 9:45PM, Feb. 21, 2007

i think that at times it can be a little hard to read *The other sword peice* for one, but i find it all funny, there for all the more amuseing to try and read. :D

skitty at 8:30PM, Feb. 19, 2007

Haha, I already know all that XD I may be (insert age), but I'm perfectly aware of how sketchy it all is. I'm not trying to make it not sketchy, and I'm not really sure why you mean by more detail... I should add bg and stuff, buuuut I forget more than half the time x_X I shade those random panels to emphasize... the... uh... question marks, and the fact that the Prince/King/Royal-pain-in-the-behind is an airhead. I never look into the toning techniques too much since I really don't care much about them this stage of the game :D I'll probably try to practice them during the summer when I have more time. Thank you for the critism though.

mishi_hime at 7:52PM, Feb. 19, 2007

you should go for more detail... its lacking. and your drawings are just a little to sketchy. but i think thats because you choose random panels to shade with pencil. If your going to shade... then you should probably do all the panels, and not just one. maybe you should look at different toning techniques - i think you'd be really good at it.