Dude, I've played Dual Hearts too. I have an idea on how we can get Matrix to make a sequel. If you're interested AIM me at Lime Mage or MSN me at cowterpie@gmail.com
The writing in this page is absent, while I can read the text it does little to make me feel for the situation. Especially since you use the same text for sound effect as you do dialogue, with no speech bubbles to separate.
For a good point you do seem to have an understanding of sound effects which is quite good. But be careful not to overuse sound effects.
My suggestion practise story-telling through panel presentation and you should be able to get your point across well.
Not quite sure why people are giving you fives. The coloring job is down right horrid. The pencils and inks aren't vivid enough to enclose the color. The drawings are very amateurish and stiff. The action that is taking place is too static, and the movement is lost.
The text just floats over the character. Please use some word bubbles.
I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to bring this to TASC's attention. I've no doubt you'll be getting more reviews by the end of the night.
Kijuna at 9:38AM, Feb. 15, 2007
Dude, I've played Dual Hearts too. I have an idea on how we can get Matrix to make a sequel. If you're interested AIM me at Lime Mage or MSN me at cowterpie@gmail.com
ZakW at 8:07AM, Dec. 3, 2006
Oh yeah! this is a drem, so theres not going to be any speech bubbles in the dream sequences, OK?
ZakW at 4:51PM, Nov. 20, 2006
I havent gotten any reveiws yet lefarce. Im probably never going to get any! ;p
ZakW at 5:13PM, Nov. 18, 2006
K, thanks for the tip Shade!
Shade at 4:45PM, Nov. 18, 2006
The writing in this page is absent, while I can read the text it does little to make me feel for the situation. Especially since you use the same text for sound effect as you do dialogue, with no speech bubbles to separate. For a good point you do seem to have an understanding of sound effects which is quite good. But be careful not to overuse sound effects. My suggestion practise story-telling through panel presentation and you should be able to get your point across well.
lefarce at 2:51PM, Nov. 18, 2006
Not quite sure why people are giving you fives. The coloring job is down right horrid. The pencils and inks aren't vivid enough to enclose the color. The drawings are very amateurish and stiff. The action that is taking place is too static, and the movement is lost. The text just floats over the character. Please use some word bubbles. I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to bring this to TASC's attention. I've no doubt you'll be getting more reviews by the end of the night.
sonic2005 at 3:48PM, Nov. 16, 2006
nice comic
anonymous at 1:58PM, Nov. 16, 2006
this comic is going to my favorites list
soonmme at 4:28PM, Nov. 13, 2006
thanks for the comment, cool comic
ZakW at 4:32PM, Nov. 8, 2006
>_< '_' :) (:
ZakW at 4:26PM, Nov. 7, 2006
(. (. !
ZakW at 4:24PM, Nov. 7, 2006
? @,@ ^,^ -* - O
ZakW at 4:13PM, Nov. 7, 2006
he's like saying OOW! '.'
animegal12 at 7:58PM, Nov. 6, 2006
wheee!!!
lunamoon_3 at 7:34PM, Nov. 6, 2006
Hey Zak! Awesome job!!!
ZakW at 6:19PM, Nov. 3, 2006
thank you!
Darkness at 6:14PM, Nov. 3, 2006
Nice comic...
ZakW at 3:35PM, Nov. 3, 2006
I'm happy it al worked out fine!