Transformation complete
Chaos Control on March 27, 2006
Now it is a race for the emeral who will win. We will soon find out. Yes I know that lately it has been one square per comic but when this scene is over it will go back to normal.
Chaos Control on March 27, 2006
Now it is a race for the emeral who will win. We will soon find out. Yes I know that lately it has been one square per comic but when this scene is over it will go back to normal.
Chaos Control at 12:06AM, April 12, 2006
Johan yes i did just pasted it on but the sprite sheet had heads on it separate. ok?
Johan at 11:18AM, April 9, 2006
This seriously is your least worst spelled comic.
Xergrim at 8:38PM, April 4, 2006
I'm not going to lie to you, you still need a lot of work. You certainly don't deserve a 5 in my opinion. Now I know you said you're going to get away from this one panel stuff, and you should, so I'll just leave that be. The text bubbles look clean, and you've saving in PNG format, so that's dandy. Your problems are spelling errors. Lots and lots of spelling errors. Here, it's just emerald, but I also remember seeing "distoryed" when it should have been "destroyed." The spelling error will be easy enough to fix. Run your text through here before putting it in your comic next time: http://www.spellcheck.net/ As for plot, well, to be honest, I don't have a bloody clue what's all going on. If you can, slow down the plot and explain a few things. Lastly, please, please, PLEASE, do NOT use bright colors if you must you different colors for each person's text. It's hard to read, and it gets annoying after a while. Again, sorry if this all seems harsh, but it just bugs me when I see people giving blind praise to stuff when the person really needs to improve.
ZoeStead at 9:20AM, March 30, 2006
Cute work :D