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KimLuster on Nov. 21, 2012
In panel 4 I tried to make a neat fast head-swivel, like she's quickly looking around, but instead I created a two-faced mutant :) Oh well, practice, practice, practice… Thanks for reading, everyone.
KimLuster on Nov. 21, 2012
In panel 4 I tried to make a neat fast head-swivel, like she's quickly looking around, but instead I created a two-faced mutant :) Oh well, practice, practice, practice… Thanks for reading, everyone.
KimLuster at 8:54PM, Jan. 24, 2013
Thank you Peipei :))
Peipei at 4:26PM, Jan. 24, 2013
Very beautiful comic :3! Your line art is indeed superior.
KimLuster at 7:08AM, Jan. 24, 2013
@Cres: - Thanks, maybe I was being overly paranoid with panel 4, thinking no one would get what was happening with her head :P) @Plymayer: Arnold is Maria's husband ("I'm Back!)- I put a little note below the panel, but obviously the note isn't obvious enough lol.
cres0055 at 6:44AM, Jan. 24, 2013
Great page. I like the choice of including all the small panels in the big panels to show emphasis. My only guess with panel 4 was maybe there was too much detail on the lighter face...but whatever. On my first read through before reading your comment I didn't notice anything about it. Although that might be your text in that panel that made it work.
plymayer at 6:34AM, Jan. 24, 2013
Arnold as in Maria's husband or Willis' brother?
plymayer at 6:32AM, Jan. 24, 2013
Panel 4 is fine. Guess they (or rather their dream selves) don't know everything.