Seems like being naked may actually be the least of her concerns - not from her point of view of course, I hasten to add, but having just had a narrow escape from being dissected alive would worry me no end.
@Peipei: ha, I can relate too; sorta happened when I lived in a dorm a there was a firedrill lol; @Plymayer: I was inspired by an old b-movie where someone was still alive (but couldn't move) when an autopsy occured - it bothered them too :) Of course, by now, it's obvious ol' Kimber Lee has avoided such a fate.
Strange dream indeed...Sneaking around while wearing nothing but a towel is definitely not my cup of tea xD.
Nice page. I can somehow relate to the character and how awkward she must feel at the moment.
No not that. It was relative to the story. I forgot that on the last page she bent that. Then I realized that that is what they were talking about. On first read through I thought they were talking about a missing corpse. But if they talk about the bent table the line becomes moderately comical.
As far as a top down view I thought it turned out really well.
Asked a friend about this: was informed that if I'd switched Panels 2 and 3, keeping everything else the same (including dialogue) it would be better, because then it'd be obvious she was on a pipe, because you could see her on a pipe first in panel 3 and... I may re-post this switching the two...
Thanks Cres - on the 2nd panel, do you mean it took you a while to figure out it was a top-down view? If so, that's on the artist - the two men below are all head and shoulders perspective-wise, so maybe they aren't obvious enough
Great page. Nice angle on the 2nd and 3rd panels. I like her look in the 6th panel plus the text. It took me a sad while to get the second panel, a sad sad while.
skyangel at 3:36PM, Nov. 4, 2014
Ewww indeed! lol
KimLuster at 7:02AM, Jan. 28, 2013
True that, Paul :) - perhaps she's a little too confident in her superhuman physical abilities whilst dreaming ;)
PaulEberhardt at 3:43AM, Jan. 28, 2013
Seems like being naked may actually be the least of her concerns - not from her point of view of course, I hasten to add, but having just had a narrow escape from being dissected alive would worry me no end.
KimLuster at 6:24AM, Jan. 27, 2013
@Peipei: ha, I can relate too; sorta happened when I lived in a dorm a there was a firedrill lol; @Plymayer: I was inspired by an old b-movie where someone was still alive (but couldn't move) when an autopsy occured - it bothered them too :) Of course, by now, it's obvious ol' Kimber Lee has avoided such a fate.
Peipei at 5:59AM, Jan. 27, 2013
Strange dream indeed...Sneaking around while wearing nothing but a towel is definitely not my cup of tea xD. Nice page. I can somehow relate to the character and how awkward she must feel at the moment.
plymayer at 3:33AM, Jan. 27, 2013
I could do without the autopsy while I'm still alive. After I'm gone it would not bother me.
KimLuster at 9:41PM, Jan. 26, 2013
Ahhh OK, I can see that now. In the future I'll be more careful with pronouns like 'this' in ambiguous situations. Thanks again :)
cres0055 at 9:10PM, Jan. 26, 2013
No not that. It was relative to the story. I forgot that on the last page she bent that. Then I realized that that is what they were talking about. On first read through I thought they were talking about a missing corpse. But if they talk about the bent table the line becomes moderately comical. As far as a top down view I thought it turned out really well.
KimLuster at 9:07PM, Jan. 26, 2013
Asked a friend about this: was informed that if I'd switched Panels 2 and 3, keeping everything else the same (including dialogue) it would be better, because then it'd be obvious she was on a pipe, because you could see her on a pipe first in panel 3 and... I may re-post this switching the two...
KimLuster at 4:39PM, Jan. 26, 2013
Thanks Cres - on the 2nd panel, do you mean it took you a while to figure out it was a top-down view? If so, that's on the artist - the two men below are all head and shoulders perspective-wise, so maybe they aren't obvious enough
cres0055 at 4:10PM, Jan. 26, 2013
Great page. Nice angle on the 2nd and 3rd panels. I like her look in the 6th panel plus the text. It took me a sad while to get the second panel, a sad sad while.