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KimLuster on Sept. 13, 2014
My skill level, along with the multiple styles I've tried, means that I haven't been consistent enough with faces for anyone to recognize a character not seen in a while by face alone. The mystery soldier is Jack Caleb, the head of Synprovision, the organization who performed the dreamed experiments that got Kimber Lee started on this ride.
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Don't expect a new reader to go read all the backlog instantly, or a current reader to remember it all, so here's a synopsis of Jack's appearances, if anyone wanted a quick background filler…
First appearance: pg 25-26
Second appearance: pg 44-45
Kidnapping Kimber: pg 77-82
Dinner Date pg 84-91 (J.Caleb gets seemingly infected on pg 90)
Conversation on Helipad: pg 106-110
Phone conversation: pg 140
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This story is ultra first-person perspective, and so far, I've kept it personal with Kimber Lee. Something extraordinary is happening to her and she's still largely clueless as to the reason (and so the reader is as well). With the coming pages, I hope things will become a little clearer, but a touch of mystery will probably always be there.
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Thanks for reading everyone!
KimLuster at 9:29AM, Sept. 14, 2014
@bravo: well we're not 'exactly' back to the same point - I hope the differences will be notable in the coming pages. And for the record, I hate A$$-pulls like 'it was all just a dream'! 'Is a it dream or not' is part of this story, so I'm asking you to trust me that I won't do the sort of mind-f**k you mean...
fallopiancrusader at 8:20AM, Sept. 14, 2014
Whew! I thought it was going to be Eli, cured of his zombie-hood. That would've been truly terrifying.
bravo1102 at 7:24AM, Sept. 14, 2014
So despite all her escapades she's almost back to where it started. Now is this where he finally convinces her that all this was a dream and she's still asleep? You wouldn't pull a mind-f**k like that on your poor readers would you?