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KimLuster on April 6, 2016
So I guess Socorro's O-face inducing & healing kiss also cleans all the blood away too…! Truthfully, I wanted to show ‘no more bite wound’ so I sorta fudged a bit and just removed most of the blood.
Panel 4: that's probably the limit on how many speech balloons you can squeeze into a panel - I need an editor! :D
See pgs. 124-125 for when Kimber Lee did a similar sort of healing to a wolf!
Next page: continuing the emulation of a certain cult-classic movie scene!
Thanks for Reading Everyone!
KimLuster at 12:31PM, April 7, 2016
@bravo: Well... I've relieved then - it certainly looked cluttered to me! Hehe Daft beats Dull any day! :))
Whirlwynd at 11:23AM, April 7, 2016
I just noticed the mist in the background -- it looks really cool =)
Call Me Tom at 10:33AM, April 7, 2016
To mirror what everyone else has said I do think the 4th panel works well! So were going to see two women in skimpy outfits fighting? Are we sure this is Kim's dream?
jerrie at 10:26AM, April 7, 2016
next challenge...we fight!
Banes at 7:12AM, April 7, 2016
Agree with bravo - there's a lot of dialogue but it reads quick and easy and doesn't seem cluttered at all. Hmm...did we know about Socorro and Kimber in college already? Was this mentioned before? Don't quite remember. umm...material for a prequel, maybe...? XD
BarryCorbett at 7:07AM, April 7, 2016
So, that's what goes on in college. Nice page, Kim.
fallopiancrusader at 6:56AM, April 7, 2016
Ahh, so the next challenge is pole vaulting? xD Nice facial expression in panel 2!
bravo1102 at 5:19AM, April 7, 2016
But panel 4 works so well without looking cluttered. Even the overlapping dialogue is clear. Now if only Kimber could stop being so daft. But then having things come too easily to a protagonist can make for a dull story.