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KimLuster on March 18, 2017
Thing number one - I realized I forgot to put in my ‘stroked path’ lines to separate my panels. You can see my original pencil lines with paint bleeding over. Oh well - not changing it now!!
Looks like Eli's G.S. diet is working…!! Not just that - he's sho' talking different too!! No longer sounds like he's from around these parts…!
I'm sure some of you get my attempt-at-humor reference in 5th panel… Let me know if you did so I don't feel like an idiot ;)
A touch of insight into why Eli's ‘menagerie’ looks like they do!!
Next page - stakes are raised… Yuuuugely!!
Thanks for reading everyone!!
LanceDanger at 1:37PM, March 21, 2017
This page is amazing!
KimLuster at 9:37PM, March 21, 2017
Thanks Lance!!
ghostrunner at 10:11AM, March 21, 2017
nah
KimLuster at 9:37PM, March 21, 2017
hehe
Peipei at 12:27AM, March 21, 2017
Loincloth FTW! Gotta love a bald guy with a body of a god in wearing very little :p! Way to go Eli! He's looking extra shiny on this page!
KimLuster at 4:50AM, March 21, 2017
Yeah... did I make the Perverted Pedophile a little too sexy...! ;)
jerrie at 10:55PM, March 19, 2017
quick...if you;re quick enough...you can take his head Kim!
KimLuster at 4:51AM, March 20, 2017
What?! You don't think she can talk him into surrendering?!!
plymayer at 9:12PM, March 19, 2017
He is looking a bit more attractive.
KimLuster at 4:50AM, March 20, 2017
Yes he is - the scamp!!
plymayer at 9:02PM, March 19, 2017
You already have mastered the new software.
KimLuster at 4:50AM, March 20, 2017
Hehe not quite - but I'm certainly getting better!
plymayer at 9:01PM, March 19, 2017
Story is certainly coming to a boil now.
KimLuster at 4:49AM, March 20, 2017
That it is!
skyangel at 3:02AM, March 19, 2017
And another thing..I'm always amused on here by comics I come across that have very rudimentary art skills and an archive of only 3 pages yet talk in their editorials about how great their comic is going to be despite the fact their last update was several years ago. Then in contrast we get seasoned masters of the art such as yourself who suffer and apologise for details that most of us would never even notice! But I'm not knocking you as I know where you're coming from. It is this nagging feeling that we could have done better that makes us strive to improve for sure.
KimLuster at 7:34AM, March 19, 2017
I hear you! It's not a nagging feeling for me - it's a loud roar haha!! I don't think I'll ever think of myself as a master of anything!! Unlike some people *wink wink*
skyangel at 2:53AM, March 19, 2017
My first thought was that Eli looks amazingly normal and (dare I say handsome?) as well as approachable now, despite his large frame but the last panel cleared that up for me nicely. This suddenly throws a new light on my previous perceptions of him so I'm intrigued as always to know if this is a side Kimberley has always subconciously blocked because of her past experiences, or is this just another mind game technique by Eli to get her to lower her gaurd. I never trust Eli and I'm often suspicous of the script writer too! ;)
KimLuster at 7:30AM, March 19, 2017
These types really can be charmers. Some of the most fun people to be around are really abusive once the doors are closed. They're wolves in sheep's clothing!! They're almost as sneaky as script writers!! ;)
Avart at 3:55PM, March 18, 2017
Hey! When did Eli became so thin? Also lost his hair and I think he is smaller don't he? Hope he didn't change his badass attitude.
KimLuster at 6:51AM, March 19, 2017
Yes, he's used the power to change himself!!
El Cid at 1:23PM, March 18, 2017
I think he'll be less of a pushover than ol' Xerxes was. It's a pretty eclectic menagerie of baddies he's assembled here... it's almost as if he knows he's in a webcomic!
KimLuster at 6:50AM, March 19, 2017
Hehe, maybe I'll have a subtle 4th-wall moment... maybe!
Banes at 11:05AM, March 18, 2017
Wow! I expected to see the monster again. Awesome twist...and the brightness of the page is nice too. Makes me think of the Wicker Man. I have no idea why, but it does. The bright, sunny look of it with the sinister undercurrent I guess!
KimLuster at 6:47AM, March 19, 2017
Thanks!! Gimp allows me to enhance the color better than my previous software. I've been experimenting a lot!!
VinoMas at 10:09AM, March 18, 2017
He's really coming along! Looking forward to the next panel!