I'm still concerned about the large use of negative space, but then again if she's dreaming maybe it's ok.
I would probably change the panel layouts to imply that she is dreaming. Perhaps soften the edges with a Photoshop airbrush. Change the colour of the panel borders maybe. Make the panels less conventional, less geometrically oblong. Perhaps make the edges wispier and less tangible. You don't even have to do much to imply a dream state, have a play with Photoshop. Make the panel borders as a separate layer and mess around with it. Use the filters, they're lots of fun.
Looking good overall.
fladam at 1:40PM, May 31, 2009
I'm still concerned about the large use of negative space, but then again if she's dreaming maybe it's ok. I would probably change the panel layouts to imply that she is dreaming. Perhaps soften the edges with a Photoshop airbrush. Change the colour of the panel borders maybe. Make the panels less conventional, less geometrically oblong. Perhaps make the edges wispier and less tangible. You don't even have to do much to imply a dream state, have a play with Photoshop. Make the panel borders as a separate layer and mess around with it. Use the filters, they're lots of fun. Looking good overall.