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nissan on April 30, 2006
check english please
at 8:17AM, May 21, 2009
I think I could probably help turn this into normal dialogue just based on your rough translation.
1: "Enough hugging, I missed you too."
2: "Will you let go now?"
3: "No Problem!"
4: "Wait a moment..."
5: "Where's your sister? Wasn't she coming with you?"
6: "She's over there!"
at 2:51AM, May 3, 2006
I have no idea what the dialogue is about on the last two panels. But the artwork is GREAT!
at 1:46PM, May 2, 2006
*agrees with kim*
just go around the forums, everyone here is glad to help you out! you may even find a dialogue editor there too ^_^
at 5:14PM, May 1, 2006
You know what? Maybe you can post in the Drunk Duck forum for help with the english! There are lots of people would would help you!
Plus you don't have to show them the page, just run the text there (and maybe a panel description when it gets confussing) and I'm sure people could help you out from there!
Keep up the good work! :-D
at 3:15PM, May 1, 2006
Beautiful art, buuuut... do the english check before you post.