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Dubiosity on June 22, 2009
Page one!! Duh dun dunnn! The intro begins. XPStrayed away from my usual refined inked and screentoned approach. This is pure pencil and slight color on photoshop. Your thoughts??
at 7:20AM, June 24, 2009
This is a cool page. It is strange enough to stand out from the crowd.
I know you wanted some criticism but there is not yet enough of a comic here for me to form an opinion.
Good so far, but I feel like I just watched the first 2 minutes of a movie and was asked to write a review of it!
But I do want more, so you must be doing something right.
at 2:36PM, June 23, 2009
Pretty good, but having the "blindingly sunny" line in the darkest part of the comic was either a bad mistake, or a clever, purposeful contradiction.