Soooooo....yeah.
Kira Dwenna on April 10, 2007
Part of this process of learning is to come back after a long hiatus and apologise profusely and make false pretenses that it will never happen again. ..At least, that's what my observations have told me.
…I did this sketch today. I kind of like it, even though it's terrible. Please feel free to take out any or all of your frustrations with me on the drawing in the form of harsh criticism.
Sehan Bowman at 5:59PM, April 18, 2007
Hmmm...I think I see what you mean, Kira. But I don't know how I'd fix it without making it look wrong in the other direction... Thanks for the compliment, Peipei!
Peipei at 9:02AM, April 13, 2007
pretty cool :3
Kira Dwenna at 8:59AM, April 13, 2007
*poke!* For the love of cookies, Bowman! *poke, poke!* I like the shirt and the shading. The pose is boring, yes, but the biggest problem I see is the arm holding the coffee mug. It seems like he is holding it a little too...close to his chest. His elbow should swing out a little, I think. He's looooose, relaxed...drink your coffee, take a naaaap....*zzzzz*.... (not enought sleep...not enough sleeeeeeeeeep)
Sehan Bowman at 5:25PM, April 11, 2007
It's gag-inducingly boring. All I did was take a body-model sketch, put clothes on it and replace that dumb streched-out arm with one holding a coffee cup. I hate the shoes. ...Oh, right. You are supposed to do the critique.