Ch. 12 Page 04

dragonsong12 on Feb. 14, 2010

Let's try this again…shall we?

I really like this moment for Ralla. There are some lines even she won't cross. And I think this would have been her attitude straight from the start, regardless. As to whether or not that's the only reason she finds it disgusting, I leave it to you to decide (I'm actually not sure myself!) but it is definitely one reason.

The wall in panel 1 should be higher. The fighters can't actually scale it, but it was easier this way to fit in some of the crowd…who I kinda like the way they look, even if they're sort of vague.

Sorry the page is a little late…I’ve been having internet problems.

Thanks for reading! See you next week!