Swimsuit S-b-S: base change
ladyranozenth on June 3, 2007
This image(1st of three) is for the Beauty Contest that was on the front page newspost a little while ago.
So, this is an adjustment of the last, before I do the finishing touches .
I added a sarong because the shorts didn't seem to fit with the new top, which I now love so much more.
If you think I should change anything else before diving into the highlights/shadows, please tell. Tomorrow I'm going to be working on the talent image, so once I get that finished to a certain extent, I'll finish this one.
Replies:
Aisu: The color/transition comment really helped. I decided to do a solid black outline after all. I was just experimenting with the flesh tone line, after all . So you think this version is good, or is there something else that needs changing?
teddibaer: I'm sorry! I understand that some would prefer to read a comic, and that's why I haven't submitted this to the CW Event List yet. Additionally, when I'm working on these contest images, I don't have enough time to also work on comics. The last nail in the coffin is even if I do have time to work on comics, I have to devote that time to other comics that have priority, since they are actually scripted and waiting for me to draw. I really don't like working on other comics when my writer is waiting for pages all the time…
As soon these contest images are done, I'll try to work on making comics. But until all this other stuff is finished, I can't guarantee pages soon.
Last, keep in mind I wouldn't be able to produce comics as often, given the same amount of time as these images. People normally prefer eye candy to nothing, which would be what this would be, if I didn't do this stuff. I was considering making this since the beginning of the CW but it wouldn't be up yet unless I posted misc. WH images.
Man, that's long and excuse-filled.
machiavelli33 at 3:04AM, June 15, 2007
Lookin' goooood....one thing I see is there's a lot of potential in the cloths and white strips that are...wrapping? Unwrapping? Molesting? ...her. If you didn't already have enough to think about, you may want to try letting those things play more of a role in your character's poses, in the way she's drawn, things like that. After all, I'm assuming they're part of her special abilities, or at the very least are a common wardrobe detail, so they seem to play a special role in who she is, and i feel you could definatley bring that out more, if you wanted. Then again, that might not be what you want to do at all.. just something to consider.
timlight at 5:02PM, June 14, 2007
beautiful! keep up the good work ^^ btw, see my rendition of White Hole on [url= http://www.drunkduck.com/DrunkDuck_Speesheez/?p=224339] DrunkDuck Speesheez: Civil War - Zac Network[/url]
Aisu at 8:28AM, June 8, 2007
No, I can't really see anything at this time or at all. I can't wait to see the finished image.
teddibaer at 6:06PM, June 5, 2007
Major improvement with the outfit! Next step would be to find more fluid poses. 276-or-something bones and joints, you know? and next time, just send me a message.