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soniccomicwriter on Aug. 25, 2006
3 freinds on a journey to be pokemon masters
while fighting freinds and foes while finding freinds and foes you will have to read to find out i will send in a page neli evryday apcept for this monday cos i am away
pichupika at 12:11PM, Feb. 13, 2008
Um. BAD GRAMMER!!!!
soniccomicwriter at 3:28PM, Aug. 26, 2006
ok lol soz i am on now
KevinClifford at 3:28PM, Aug. 26, 2006
... It'd be better if you were actually on, though... (>.>)
soniccomicwriter at 3:26PM, Aug. 26, 2006
ok talk to me then i am making page 2 now
KevinClifford at 3:26PM, Aug. 26, 2006
I'm already on your MSN. :P
soniccomicwriter at 3:26PM, Aug. 26, 2006
ok then that dm ok then i will do that with my next comic do you have msn so that i can do my comic send it to you then you tell me my mistakes i change them then send it on to dd
soniccomicwriter at 3:25PM, Aug. 26, 2006
and who is hac
KevinClifford at 3:25PM, Aug. 26, 2006
You reply way to fast... *sigh* I can't unreport. So, to late. [url=http://www.drunkduck.com/Hoenn_Advance_Champions/]HAC[/url] stands for [url=http://www.drunkduck.com/Hoenn_Advance_Champions/]Hoenn Advance Champions[/url].
soniccomicwriter at 3:25PM, Aug. 26, 2006
ok then i will do that with my next comic do you have msn so that i can do my comic send it to you then you tell me my mistakes i change them then send it on to dd
KevinClifford at 3:23PM, Aug. 26, 2006
"I" is spelled wrong a HELLS OF ALOT (It is not "i" it's "I" CAPPED.) I'm, also... Missing some Punctuations, too. And "ALL PROPER NOUNS NEED TO BEGIN WITH A CAPITAL LETTER!" (I.E. Names, Places, etc.)
soniccomicwriter at 3:22PM, Aug. 26, 2006
i dont care they can pick one what are you on about i only asked them they dont have to say yes and who is hac and i am sorry i will nt ask to advertise anymore stuff but dont report me i dont want to get banned
KevinClifford at 3:20PM, Aug. 26, 2006
Also... Why the hell would you put more than one voting button?! You can only fucking vote once a day! (And by more than one, I'm talking about the fact that you put more than one button up for just ONE voting place.) AND STOP SPAMMING DD'S SYSTEM FOR ADVERTISING! ITS AGAINST DD'S RULES AND REGULATIONS! (I reported every last one you did on the comics I'm assisted to... Though I find it odd you didn't do it to HAC! :O)
soniccomicwriter at 3:20PM, Aug. 26, 2006
the order in the panels is easy left to right what should i re-size and you can tell in witch order they speak and tell me all the words witch are spelt wrong
KevinClifford at 3:17PM, Aug. 26, 2006
I have a 5 on most of my comics... And I have 55 comics... :P 1.) Add borders. Can't really see where it starts and ends. 2.) Re-size (Select something -> Stretch/Screw -> Enter numbers that ends in 00.) 3.) Dude, in English, people read Left to right, up to down. So, following this rule, the guy/girl talking first should have his/her box up further than the guy/girl talking second. 4.) Spell Check ... ZOMG! Write out the script in MS Word, check for spelling errors, then put into Paint!
soniccomicwriter at 3:04PM, Aug. 26, 2006
any one is aloud to assist me if they like but they have to have pokemon comic with at list a 25 rating in total or more (add up comment ratings to get total)
soniccomicwriter at 2:39PM, Aug. 26, 2006
no not in this comic it is kinda like a mix of pokemon storys its not like the series but any way thanks fro commenting and rating it is the first comic with speech bubbles that i have done i aint sayin g you have to but if you want you can assist my comic plz would you vote for my comic to as well thank you i will just tell ya i little secret in page 2 ash battles this girl called diana and they battle and if ash loses she joins the gang but she has a bulbasaur
Drazi500 at 2:34PM, Aug. 26, 2006
good start XD But isn't gary usally mean to ash.