Ep. 1 Page 11
Abt_Nihil on Aug. 17, 2007
I realize this page is like those episodes of Ghost In The Shell: Stand Alone Complex which everyone complains about. I know the writers went over the scripts a dozen times, condensing as much information into as little lines as possible. And that's exactly what I had to do here.
Getting some nice art inbetween those balloons was a challenge too ^^; I tried choosing some interesting perspectives to spice things up a bit. I went over the pencils quite a few times.
While you're at it, you may want to check out the Energize Sketchbook featuring some art by yours truly… and then some:
The Energize Sketchbook
simonitro at 11:43AM, Oct. 9, 2007
The story transistion is well thought to keep things feel interesting... I like it thus far!
Fitz at 3:11PM, Sept. 4, 2007
EMP... Reminds me of the web tv series Afterworld. Scary stuff! And indeed, there's a lot of text on this page, but somehow I don't mind at all :) And your way to indicate switching between scenes is really great. A nice comic relief at the end, too.
TheMidge28 at 7:45PM, Aug. 18, 2007
wow...that was a lot to read...it took 2 mins...but I may be a slow reader =) the page looks great and I agree with Nepath...great job laying this all out...in the black and white though following the text and scene trnsition was difficult...color or gray tones to show varying speakers may have worked here...great work none the less and love the evolving story line...
Nepath at 9:59AM, Aug. 18, 2007
It amazes me how much narrative you can get into a page without it looking over crowed or crammed. It is one of your many skills. Thanks for the link by the way.