Ep. 1 Page 16
Abt_Nihil on Aug. 22, 2007
I think I rewrote this part several times… I could have had the spiky hair guy give a monologue to Naomi, but I think this short introduction works best… it creates suspense.
Abt_Nihil on Aug. 22, 2007
I think I rewrote this part several times… I could have had the spiky hair guy give a monologue to Naomi, but I think this short introduction works best… it creates suspense.
Fitz at 4:40AM, Sept. 16, 2007
Ooh is he gonna kidnap her? Take her out of the building just like that? Hmm... Let's see! Btw, he looks kind of like Wolverine, doesn't he?
TheMidge28 at 1:13PM, Aug. 23, 2007
it sure does...what is he going to do? great set up!