page seven
denji on Dec. 14, 2007
again- i was not happy with pao's face on the 3rd panel, so re-did it ^^; I hope it doesn't show too much.
this comic has 2 meanings- this page is the start of one..but I won't reveal that xD work it out for yourself :)
i talk too much xD
my own way of drawing really annoys me xD but i feel good that the story is coming together so well!! I hope more people read the comic! :3 x bring on christmas holidays!! I'm so happy!!!
Ichigopai chan at 4:48AM, Dec. 31, 2007
I can't tell that you re-did it ... I'm not sure how I could XD Wowy. I'm really loving this page. The feelings expressed in their expressions show through really bright ! And the people have different hair ! I find it really hard to do that, when creating people in the background. They just end up looking the same as the main char CX The last panel has that lovely nice-kind-of-busy feeling to it.
manga_mace at 2:50AM, Dec. 16, 2007
loving it so far : D especially panels 1 and 3! : D well done denji