Willow wind Sylph at 6:37PM, Sept. 18, 2012

uh, daray? what are you thinking, wearing a disaster like that?

NightReflection at 1:57PM, Aug. 4, 2010

I will name him George. Love it. Life expectancy of a few days at most! I also like claw weapons. Are the claws extensions of his fingers or fixed into the back of the gloves?

Canuovea at 12:31AM, July 20, 2010

Daray. Full of so much win right now. I can't believe I said something was "full of win." It's so... so... not... regular English... Oh well, I'm not exactly the best at grammar anyway.

Lilac at 3:05PM, May 23, 2009

I like Daray so much right now..XDD

Lifon at 12:22PM, May 20, 2009

Daray looks pretty awesome in the last two panels, in an evil-way.

CryForE at 7:09AM, March 2, 2009

To Ameliús and those who were asking 'bout panel 4: The page is perfectly fine, 'cause if ye look at panel 3 ye see that kavonn is using his left arm to point with, and we know that they are facing each other (Kavonn and the fairies that's) so that escentially means he points to the side, and in panel 4 they look in that direction which he points. Get it? If ye ever come back and read this that's... -.- But anywho, really like Daray's weapons :D They look neat :)

Reitei at 5:34PM, July 24, 2008

Nice daray. They all get good weapons, even clawed gloves.

lordlyhour at 1:58AM, July 3, 2008

yay daray :D

Amelius at 2:41PM, June 5, 2008

Ah, they turned to the side because he was pointing to the side, actually ^_^ Thanks for the advice though, sorry if it didn't read the way I intended!

Yellowpages at 1:44PM, June 2, 2008

about the perspective in the 4 panel, it looks like kavonn is pointing at somthing behind them, and when they turn there heads, they only turn them to the side, maybe it woud have been better if they turnd so you coud see there backs?

Warriorking4ever at 6:29PM, March 2, 2008

dude! Daray's become a shirtless Freddy Kruger! SWEET! I knew he could be kickass if he put his mind to it (and had some nasty claws to boot, lol). Great save Daray!

Amelius at 1:21AM, June 6, 2007

Crap, I forgot to mention that perspective applies to the angle at which the viewer is viewing something as well. "Birds eye view" and "Worms eye view" are perspective examples. These present dramatic angles where usually proportionate things are enlarged or shrunken to give the illusion of depth.

Amelius at 1:17AM, June 6, 2007

I like Zelda: You might wanna clarify that for me, 'cuz I have no idea what you meant by that... I'm confused why the perspective would be off in that panel. They did all turn at once, that's why there's a big "turn!" sound effect floating over their heads. If you're finding fault with the motion lines, that's understandable but not a perspective issue. Your description of what's wrong with it is describing exactly what I was going for, so I am wondering if it is simply unclear that they are supposed to be looking the direction he pointed in confusion? Really, I appreciate the critique and I am very open to suggestions, it's just that I feel a little confused as to what the real problem is. Panel one and nine have examples of perspective. Perspective is how things lay on the horizon line, and whether they appear close or far away. I dunno where that applies to panel four. And it's not a "pan around" shot, they are in the same place only they did a half-turn with their torsos and a turn of the head to profiles. Yeah the coloring is a little flat there but it's not a perspective issue either. Dunno why I'm getting into all this since it's unlikely you'll come back to this page and see this, but anyone else reading this, can ya help me out here?

Foxy at 5:51PM, May 23, 2007

Mm, he himself doesn't seem to care or be in as much pain as a human would.

I like zelda at 6:19PM, March 22, 2007

The perspective is a bit off in panel four, it looks like wind is blowing past their heads, or the all turned like they do on those weird cartoons where there are four people and they can feel a big dog's breath on their necks. Anyway, 3/5. did that sound a bit odd?

evildemon at 9:18PM, July 5, 2006

what goes around, comes around?

ThisOtherCrazyChick at 2:57PM, March 12, 2006

was that a pick up line or a threat...it was a little of both...weird

Tsuki Sho at 12:41PM, March 12, 2006

*purr* Shirtless...yum

X Daggers at 9:04AM, March 12, 2006

Daray's just awkward like that anyway, Amy. Whoot, this rocks! Daray's cool :) Wow that one girl is only concerned about the Jackalope while all this is happening. (O_o)

SailorPoison at 8:37AM, March 12, 2006

Daray is damn funny

Milky at 11:59PM, March 11, 2006

Yay for Daray's tatoos!

Arya at 11:05PM, March 11, 2006

Thos gloves are fantastic *.*

whiteninja at 10:59PM, March 11, 2006

I feel more pity towards the jakalope than the fairy-chick.