Thank you Luna! Yeah, I've been planning this scene for a long time... well, the whole story, really. I actually wrote it in novel form originally, but I felt a lot of the world was lost when there was nothing visual to show what the world really looked like. Aaaand looks like I need to thank Strain some more. He's been such a big help in this project! /hugs everyone/
I like how you have started to introduce the story through a problem that the main character has decided to try to take care of. Also, I sort of like the dark tone you have since it not only tells the reader its dark, but also how grim the situation is.
Also... Strain42 sent me to read this.
LoorTheDarkElf at 4:23PM, Jan. 30, 2012
Thank you Luna! Yeah, I've been planning this scene for a long time... well, the whole story, really. I actually wrote it in novel form originally, but I felt a lot of the world was lost when there was nothing visual to show what the world really looked like. Aaaand looks like I need to thank Strain some more. He's been such a big help in this project! /hugs everyone/
LunaEsol at 3:42PM, Jan. 30, 2012
I like how you have started to introduce the story through a problem that the main character has decided to try to take care of. Also, I sort of like the dark tone you have since it not only tells the reader its dark, but also how grim the situation is. Also... Strain42 sent me to read this.
LoorTheDarkElf at 9:13AM, Jan. 30, 2012
Thank you!
Kou the Mad at 1:29AM, Jan. 30, 2012
i like where this is going (Strain sent me) subbed, faved, recommended.