Prolog-Pg.20
LoorTheDarkElf on March 12, 2012
So let's make a capable, confident, clearly hero-material character…
And kill her off before we even get to the first chapter.
Yep, no one's gonna hate me for that one.
… :D
-Loor
Cohime
LoorTheDarkElf on March 12, 2012
So let's make a capable, confident, clearly hero-material character…
And kill her off before we even get to the first chapter.
Yep, no one's gonna hate me for that one.
… :D
-Loor
LoorTheDarkElf at 9:37PM, March 13, 2012
Ah, okies. The very first time I murdered a character (in a fanfic many years ago) my entire fanbase kinda got their panties in a twist over it... Though granted, the murder was sorta out of left-field. It DID serve a purpose though. As for this death; fuck yes it serves a purpose; driving the rest of the story. >.<
Strain42 at 8:01PM, March 13, 2012
Only gratuitous death pisses people off. If you have real meaning behind it and it serves the story, you've done your job, and your readers will respect that.
Kou the Mad at 8:54AM, March 12, 2012
i find it somewhat unlikely a single arrow is gonna go completely through 2 people. not saying this is bad, just saying.
LunaEsol at 7:30AM, March 12, 2012
Nah she can't be dead since she is used to a be main character before and main characters never die in the beginning of a story. But nice artwork showing the arrow.