My favorate panel is panel 3 I just love it for some reason oh and if follow what's going on I will explain latter oh and today was a DOUBLE UPDATE so go one page back if you feel like you missed a page please leave comments and have a great weekend
...nigellashade it did not crash near any one that stuff blowing past her what cuased the simlator to malfiction the TV to crash was devin and david's power
I wonder what was happening! For the television crashing like that, it seem to be aimed towards a target.
They should sue the arcade place, cause of dangerous mis-use of items..(Like the television box crashing near a person).
Glad you've updated Melissa, I've noticed your Arm movements on the pages before this as well.. It's looking a bit better with different angles. ^___~
Take care, & have a happy New Year's day!
~M~ v~~~~~v
I love the third panel too. Your characters and story is always so cool. XD I'm just waiting for a very hyper moment to just pop out. But that would be too common. The dialogue in the first panel is kept pretty simple. Very kid-anime-action like, but still very nice. Also, I still LOVE that kitty hat. Keep up the awesome work!
I love the third panel as well, I find it very symbolic. If David was grey and Devin was black, the white space where they overlap sort of show how Melissa has connections to both of them and could symbolise possible confusion of being torn in two between them -as well as- simply being a flash of light. (: Possibly. Either way it is a very effective tableau.
I like how you managed to create tails to the spiky-word balloons and show exactly who is saying what, that can be really difficult to achieve for those type of word balloons. And again you convey the feel of a voice being heard over a speaker, just because of the lack -of- that tail. =D
How dare tall guy call Shelby a clumsy kid ]:< she's a -customer!- he's not allowed to treat her that way. somebody fire him! D: but -after- he's gotten Shelby a root beer.
I love the step-by-step action shots of both how the TV crashes and how everyone reactions to the white light in the second row, too =3
Rubygem at 1:36AM, Dec. 31, 2006
...nigellashade it did not crash near any one that stuff blowing past her what cuased the simlator to malfiction the TV to crash was devin and david's power
Nigellashade at 7:31PM, Dec. 30, 2006
I wonder what was happening! For the television crashing like that, it seem to be aimed towards a target. They should sue the arcade place, cause of dangerous mis-use of items..(Like the television box crashing near a person). Glad you've updated Melissa, I've noticed your Arm movements on the pages before this as well.. It's looking a bit better with different angles. ^___~ Take care, & have a happy New Year's day! ~M~ v~~~~~v
Kat at 5:32PM, Dec. 30, 2006
^^ good pages Ruby!
gggggggghhhhhhhh55 at 3:08PM, Dec. 30, 2006
I love the third panel too. Your characters and story is always so cool. XD I'm just waiting for a very hyper moment to just pop out. But that would be too common. The dialogue in the first panel is kept pretty simple. Very kid-anime-action like, but still very nice. Also, I still LOVE that kitty hat. Keep up the awesome work!
ReaperofSouls at 2:53PM, Dec. 30, 2006
i personally think that devin should have won the match because he is the underdog and i know him personally.
Freakeh at 2:17PM, Dec. 30, 2006
I love the third panel as well, I find it very symbolic. If David was grey and Devin was black, the white space where they overlap sort of show how Melissa has connections to both of them and could symbolise possible confusion of being torn in two between them -as well as- simply being a flash of light. (: Possibly. Either way it is a very effective tableau. I like how you managed to create tails to the spiky-word balloons and show exactly who is saying what, that can be really difficult to achieve for those type of word balloons. And again you convey the feel of a voice being heard over a speaker, just because of the lack -of- that tail. =D How dare tall guy call Shelby a clumsy kid ]:< she's a -customer!- he's not allowed to treat her that way. somebody fire him! D: but -after- he's gotten Shelby a root beer. I love the step-by-step action shots of both how the TV crashes and how everyone reactions to the white light in the second row, too =3