lol! So cute! =3 I just
started reading this. ^^ And
you have such a cute art
style! I love the story so
far... aliens~! ^o^
(I hope she's going to
be alright... o.o;; )
Thanks for the crits guys. I'm definitely looking over them and seeing how I can improve.
Tones may not be the best style for ELO-- they're too mature I think. But I had to try. :)
My drawing style is bothering me. I've been meaning to change the way I do a few things, and I've finally begun doing so. Nothing drastic, just better stuffs.
I hate my use of colors. It really gives me a migraine (which is why I tried toning) so I'll be trying different coloring styles to find some less insane way to do this. Either more white or lowering the opacity.
Next update might be this weekend.
Thanks for sticking with me and helping me. XD
hmmm...switched to grey tones again...hmmm...I really like the colored pages myself. it set ELO apart from most manga influenced comics.... but the page is still quite wonderful! and I like the smack back the original scene...with her hiding out behind the tree...she was too busy having a flashback!
wow, your manga art style is amazing! This is the type of manga style that I LOVE to read. Great coloring and contrasting of the blacks, whites and grays. Cute art, too.
MeepLover at 11:17AM, May 23, 2010
RUN!!! THERE GONNA EAT U!!!
delilakrill at 6:26AM, Nov. 10, 2007
it's cool!:)
simonitro at 10:41AM, Nov. 5, 2007
Oh darn, she has been spotted.
michi_no at 8:52PM, Aug. 30, 2007
lol! So cute! =3 I just started reading this. ^^ And you have such a cute art style! I love the story so far... aliens~! ^o^ (I hope she's going to be alright... o.o;; )
LavenderMe at 6:42AM, Aug. 30, 2007
DarkChibiShadow wrote: OH NO. WHEN I READ THIS I THOUGHT. RAPE. DX Actually that's what I thought too.I have SUCH a weird mind ! =P
LavenderMe at 5:02AM, Aug. 30, 2007
Oh No! They might...They might....uh.Okay so I'm totally out of ideas,Ask me what I think LATER.
pastel at 5:23PM, Aug. 29, 2007
Thanks for the crits guys. I'm definitely looking over them and seeing how I can improve. Tones may not be the best style for ELO-- they're too mature I think. But I had to try. :) My drawing style is bothering me. I've been meaning to change the way I do a few things, and I've finally begun doing so. Nothing drastic, just better stuffs. I hate my use of colors. It really gives me a migraine (which is why I tried toning) so I'll be trying different coloring styles to find some less insane way to do this. Either more white or lowering the opacity. Next update might be this weekend. Thanks for sticking with me and helping me. XD
Bocaj at 4:58PM, Aug. 29, 2007
WHAT A TWIST!
vgman at 11:32AM, Aug. 29, 2007
the first panel was great. not such a fan of the seconed one very nice otherwise
sadTakara at 10:36AM, Aug. 29, 2007
o.o *gasp* Nooo!
DarkChibiShadow at 10:34AM, Aug. 29, 2007
OH NO. WHEN I READ THIS I THOUGHT. RAPE. DX
newgirlcomic at 8:24AM, Aug. 29, 2007
BUSTED!!! :P
TheMidge28 at 4:30AM, Aug. 29, 2007
hmmm...switched to grey tones again...hmmm...I really like the colored pages myself. it set ELO apart from most manga influenced comics.... but the page is still quite wonderful! and I like the smack back the original scene...with her hiding out behind the tree...she was too busy having a flashback!
skyangel at 1:57AM, Aug. 29, 2007
ooooooh! sounds like trouble. I love her expression in that top pic!!
nerdsareinvading at 10:31PM, Aug. 28, 2007
the page looks very nice... and, no i didnt see this coming...
yareufollowingme at 10:12PM, Aug. 28, 2007
Orgy! err sorry Pastel. I'm making perverted comments on your E-rated comic again...
kawaiidaigakusei at 10:10PM, Aug. 28, 2007
wow, your manga art style is amazing! This is the type of manga style that I LOVE to read. Great coloring and contrasting of the blacks, whites and grays. Cute art, too.
Dark Clown at 10:07PM, Aug. 28, 2007
RUN!! Cute girl Run. before the anal prob you...