Chapter 2: Down The Mountain - page 9
mlai on Aug. 12, 2007
Written by me. Drawn by Ed Bangalan.
Bear with Ed while he has fun with his new Tablet. He'll get used to it.
Visit the sister manga, FIGHT 1. Will be updated tonight.
In the bottom 2 panels, remember that balloons with inward tails signify that the speaker is offscreen. It also helps differentiate the speaker by noting that they're speaking two different modes of English.
If Knight's English is too taxing for you, here's the page 9 version fed through a translator.
mlai at 2:02PM, Aug. 13, 2007
Hi EEN! All honest opinions welcome! I agree F2 has a riskier beginning because it's less characters. That's why F1 and F2 are simultaneous stories; they support each other. Don't think of them as 2 separate entities. See F2 as the other side of the story that was hidden from you the last time. We still have your guest page, btw. Or at least Ed does. (He'd better.)
Evil Emperor Nick at 12:27PM, Aug. 13, 2007
hmmm so far I don't like this opening as much as I enjoyed Fight 1. I took to most of the main cast right away in Fight 1. I'm holding off judgement but so far nothing had grabed me the way the original series did. Still it is very good to see this series back. I've long missed it and I was just talking about it last week if you can belive it. Please keep updating.
mlai at 11:40AM, Aug. 13, 2007
@Vi: Thanks. That's why I'm sticking with it, despite its violation of 1 of the prime rules of comics: [i]If the reader can't understand it, it won't get read.[/i]
Darth Mongoose at 8:52AM, Aug. 13, 2007
Hi, I'm back from my con holiday! Glad to see this is going well!
vi___wong at 8:08AM, Aug. 13, 2007
the knight's english is ...well it sound.. kind of poetic.