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mlai on Aug. 15, 2007
This chapter written by me, edited and drawn by Ed Bangalan.
Read the sister manga FIGHT 1, for the other half of the full story. Each title follows a different group of characters in the same world.
I don't think you need it much on this page, but here's the page version with Knight's English translated to modern English. BTW, these are all approximate translations.
@ Darth: Actually yes, “fight” applies to me and Ed also.
herio at 8:58PM, Aug. 16, 2007
cool oh i upadte my work twice
mlai at 3:51PM, Aug. 16, 2007
[b]Hi EEN.[/b] 1. I began writing F2 in Dec 2006. 2. I would be exceedingly thrilled if me and Ed have the stamina to complete F1 and F2. If not, then at least F2 first. 3. In every comics page, there is always one "dominant panel." Panel 1 takes up 80% of the page; it takes 80% of the drama. 4. Well, you don't see Nuada on my banner do you? The knight's obviously "the face" of F2, at least currently. But she's definitely not the whole show. As the story progresses, every main character will become important. 5. Thanks for your in-depth critique via PQ! 6. Thank you for your in-depth comments! You're my type of target audience! Ed appreciates you too.
Evil Emperor Nick at 12:22PM, Aug. 16, 2007
I am very currious and forgive me if I missed this in your notes. Was fight 1 and fight 2 written together or was fight 2 written after fight 1? Additionally if these go well might there ever be a fight 3? I really like that first panel thought the other two fail to carry anywhere close the same sense of drama. I love the knights style of speach it really seems to give weight to what she says most times and really helps give her personality. It make some other character seem boring or plain by compairison at time.