Page 20
mlai on Aug. 28, 2007
This page drawn by me, lettered by DigitalCAPS.
Top page banner coloured by Whirlwynd.
Read the sister series FIGHT 1; each series follows a different group of characters in the same world.
Rant on Chase's speech:
It's not easy. There's a reason why nobody before me ever did this in a comic book, aside from the fear that it may not be well-received.
But because I'm such a stickler for authenticity, you can rest assured that whatever comes out of her mouth is broadcast to you direct from 1469, minus the weird archaic spelling for the same words which makes you sound like a drunk bee if you try to read them out loud.
Well, much of the time. The other times, either I modernize her speech a bit because the 100% authentic version is just too incomprehensible, or I just CBA'ed.
However, you may have noticed that she never says “thy, thou, thine, thee,” etc. There's a plot reason, but the personal/real reason is because it's laughable how in most other work, when a character says “thou art” it's automatically understood that he's omg medieval, even though all the rest of his speech is modern grammar. So I purposely do the opposite: Her speech is 100% archaic except she never says “thou art.”
Anyways, at this point me & Ed can't imagine her talking any other way, anymore.
Swiftgold at 12:04AM, Sept. 5, 2010
I feel compelled to go back in time and say that I really like the art in this page, the background and especially the faces/expressions...
Evil Emperor Nick at 1:06PM, Aug. 30, 2007
Oh in addition I really like the flow and feel of this page. Your choice of panels, angles (almost wrote Angels there), & focus are great. My only complaint is the way the background disapears half way through the page. PS: I really enjoyed chase's expressions in this issue!
Evil Emperor Nick at 7:31AM, Aug. 30, 2007
The Odin Son doth think thou moketh the way he speaks.
JustNoPoint at 7:14AM, Aug. 30, 2007
Yeah, I really like the way she talks as well. I also have a fondness for scenes like this. I really love the character focus you are putting on this side of the story.
Darth Mongoose at 2:39AM, Aug. 30, 2007
I really like her speech. It's not often I see examples of well-written old English (it's usually totally crap, like in bad RPGs 'Thou must goeth to the enchanted cave and get yon sword!' ....ughhhhhh).
vi___wong at 6:25PM, Aug. 29, 2007
I love her expression in the last panel.
Rhykker at 4:47PM, Aug. 29, 2007
Great stuff.