As has already been said that first panel is really unclear. I think it would have probably been better to split the action into multiple panels for the sake of clairity.
Bottom panel art: Ed departed from my script a bit. He likes to experiment with stuff. Often they work.
Top panel art: Yeah that's Chase sprinting out of the shelter. I guess the BWOOSH comes from her heavy weight.
@ DM: The pace of this encounter will ebb and flow.
Really like the way the bottom panel is drawn! That really shows his anger well. Looks like he is literally shaking with anger.
I have to say though, the top panel slightly confuses me. I think it is Chase leaping away from the campsite.
It's a bit hard to make out what is actually going on back there.
Unless that is the point, then don't mind me and I will see what is occurring soon enough.
giovanni at 5:30PM, July 28, 2008
it like the guy on the bottom panel is shaking a lot
kyupol at 11:28AM, Oct. 13, 2007
(*wastes time typing "lmao"*)
mlai at 6:14PM, Oct. 12, 2007
(*currently inking page #7 of my 12 pages*) (*wastes time by staring at inked pages*)
kyupol at 5:35PM, Oct. 12, 2007
(*anticipates the big fight scene*)
Evil Emperor Nick at 11:08AM, Oct. 8, 2007
As has already been said that first panel is really unclear. I think it would have probably been better to split the action into multiple panels for the sake of clairity.
mlai at 5:36PM, Oct. 7, 2007
Bottom panel art: Ed departed from my script a bit. He likes to experiment with stuff. Often they work. Top panel art: Yeah that's Chase sprinting out of the shelter. I guess the BWOOSH comes from her heavy weight. @ DM: The pace of this encounter will ebb and flow.
JustNoPoint at 5:12PM, Oct. 7, 2007
Really like the way the bottom panel is drawn! That really shows his anger well. Looks like he is literally shaking with anger. I have to say though, the top panel slightly confuses me. I think it is Chase leaping away from the campsite. It's a bit hard to make out what is actually going on back there. Unless that is the point, then don't mind me and I will see what is occurring soon enough.
Janen at 1:28PM, Oct. 7, 2007
Nice knife.
Darth Mongoose at 8:14AM, Oct. 7, 2007
I like the use of rough CG and inking here to give a sense of texture and speed. I can imagine all of this is happening really fast.