Page 85
mlai on Aug. 17, 2008
This page by me. I decided to forgo the black between-panel spaces; it's more trouble than it's worth. Y'all know it's night time.
A lot of talking… so I tried to pay attention to where I put all the balloons. Read some Bleach manga to get inspired on balloon placement.
She really is that calm and nice (regarding most things), I'm not making it up.
Read the companion comic FIGHT 1; both stories take place in the same world.
krrack_knut at 11:48PM, Sept. 8, 2008
Ah! I Finally Realized Who Chase Is! She's SABER From FATE/STAY Night! Nuada's So Very Nervous. Hilarious.
Sea_Cow at 5:45PM, Aug. 31, 2008
"Rags to catch the monthly blood" "Taken humours from your body" I'm starting to like Chase.
giovanni at 4:45PM, Aug. 21, 2008
"dolt" i like. you improved
Darth Mongoose at 2:08PM, Aug. 20, 2008
Pffffhahahahahaa! Oh crap, he chucked away her Medieval Always Ultra!
roycemarie at 12:40AM, Aug. 20, 2008
Lovely page, well done.
edbang at 7:21AM, Aug. 19, 2008
You did good on this page. Ever since I've known you, you struggled with two things: comedy and placing a word balloon over what you drew. I think you've evolved as a writer and comic artist with this page. I agree with Cyberdog: Nice!
kyupol at 9:29PM, Aug. 18, 2008
this page is funny
mlai at 8:02PM, Aug. 18, 2008
Heh, I keep making edits to this page. I think this is the final version. I made the pants situation even worse. Chase in panel 1 always had an unseen "[i]wtf did you do to my pants[/i]" expression... the final version makes this more apparent. I just saw Wall-E, so I gave Nuada that expression in panel 1. It's like, how many things can Nuada say/do before a girl slaps him with a wet trout? Luckily for him it's Chase. [b]@ Fenn, Alej:[/b] Got the idea at the last minute when I thought about Sakura's CHAAA~! alter ego (Naruto). [b]@ Pat:[/b] She hasn't brushed for 2-3 days. Nuada wouldn't know yet, but 1 of the only ways to distract Chase is to give her something to chew on. [b]@ JNP:[/b] Thanks for the compliments. I'm looking forward to drawing the next 2 (or so) pages; it's the good part IMO. I srsly had no idea how I'd do all the balloons without referencing Bleach; I borrowed some volumes from a cousin. Without it, this prolly would've taken 2 pages.
cyberdog at 7:58PM, Aug. 18, 2008
NNNNNNiiiiiiiiiiiiiiCCCCCCEEEE!!!
JustNoPoint at 6:17PM, Aug. 18, 2008
Wow. That's good writing. You really show a lot of their personality in this page. The interaction here is probably some of the best I've seen. Especially with the little things you added to spice up the page. The small Nuada, Chase's face in panels 4, 5, and 7. I really like Nuada's personality. Ugh, all the balloons must have been a nightmare.
patrickdevine at 4:20PM, Aug. 18, 2008
Oh yeah, girls do that... I like how Chase seems to be taking everything in stride. Also, what's the minty sprig for? to give her minty-fresh breath?
alejkhan at 1:16PM, Aug. 18, 2008
It always makes me happy when adventure stories with women in the middle of nowhere take into account womanly things! Mini-Nuada is extra cute.
Fenn at 11:35AM, Aug. 18, 2008
I lol'd at the li'l Nuada going "Dolt!"