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mlai on Oct. 7, 2008
Shhh, pipe down y'all, Miss Chase gon' tell a story! We love a story!
This page by me. The reason this page is less than full-page is because I made revisions to my panels as I drew, cutting/ pasting/ moving panels over several pages in order to improve flow, and this page ended up being short.
In case we think Nuada is overreacting, we should remember that while chapter 3 was months ago for us, it was only a couple of days ago for him. Also, he's used to being treated like a red-headed stepchild.
Read the companion comic FIGHT 1; both stories take place in the same world.
mlai at 2:33AM, Oct. 9, 2008
[b]@ Krrack, Gio:[/b] It's all in your head! >: D [b]@ EEN:[/b] Yeah I can always get better. [b]@ JNP:[/b] -Nuada has always been beefy. Now I'm just exaggerating him to the comic book definition of beefy. -Yeah she doesn't understand what he's so worked up about. [b]@ Ailorn:[/b] -Yeah that's how I read story webcomics too, for the most part. I get distracted for a [i]long[/i] while before I return to anything. -Glad to hear it! When characters have chemistry, they write themselves. That's what I feel. The only thing an author has to do is to ensure that his/her own fanboy/fangirl-ness is kept out of it. I've edited this arc of the story (the mountain arc) many times, to filter myself out of their chemistry. So to speak.
Ailorn at 9:57PM, Oct. 8, 2008
^-^ Its so refreshing the way they interact. Im so sick of the blushing bullshit and love triangles. btw, im never gone for good, i just get distracted for a while ;)
roycemarie at 6:45PM, Oct. 8, 2008
OMG, this is so funny.
kyupol at 2:20PM, Oct. 8, 2008
glad i didnt miss alot of pages.
giovanni at 2:07PM, Oct. 8, 2008
what tension! what silliness what....eehhhhh......jumpiness?
JustNoPoint at 7:36AM, Oct. 8, 2008
Chase [i]and[/i] Nuada have been rendered better the past couple of pages. The beefing up on Nuada got rid of some of the "silliness" his look had going for a bit. Nuada is a bit silly, but I like it when he LOOKS cool. Even when being dolt-headed. Chase actually looks annoyed in the next to last panel. That's something not seen often.
Evil Emperor Nick at 6:21AM, Oct. 8, 2008
I really like Chase in the last panel. Very nice work there.
krrack_knut at 4:35AM, Oct. 8, 2008
My, My, My - He's A Jumpy One! Sexual Tension...