03-17: Ass-Kicking Time
iagojester on Sept. 25, 2006
Hey guys, this is my 100th page! I thought I'd never make it!
Two things:
So, this page seems really awkward to me, like it doesn't flow right. I think it might be my attempt at too many non-face-centered shots. If anyone can pinpoint something else, I'd appreciate it.
I've been darkening all my outlines recently- I think it helps differentiate from the background. Anyone disagree?
Commenties:
ThisbeRichard: Yea, we'll get to Kaanis and ‘Yote. Never fear. As for Wolfe… mua ha ha ha!!
Winzerella: Yea, you’re telling me you don't believe it… imagine my surprise when a scanner arrived! The only problem was that I wasn't home to get it, so they brought it to the school where I worked because I was the only foreigner and they all know where I am at any given time. … evil small towns and my lack of blending in.
ejb: Yea… sorry about that. Malevin is probably more of the more useful characters in that he's sent on a whole bunch of missions for reasons we don't know yet, but he rarely completes them. Why? Stay tunned.
Mina-Lunga: Yea for custard! … I think. Custardy water… Malevin in custard… ew.
Thanks for pointing out the spelling mistake. Can you believe I teach English? Thank God I have a dictionary. And dude… Malevin didn't keep swimming! He got sent back to his “True Time.” He's gone!
Wazaga: Aw shucks. Thanks.
Alejkhan + Jenshin: I know, right? I think MinaLunga deserves some big reward or something.
Jazhara7 at 3:43AM, June 8, 2007
I absolutely love this page. The canvas looks great. The darker outlines really help. - :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
simonitro at 9:24AM, March 22, 2007
The first panel is amazing... it is done very well! The shot showing a heroism shot! It' very effective in a comedy way!
Ozoneocean at 9:00PM, Oct. 16, 2006
It all works ok. There're some errors in the view in the top panel, but it's all pretty much ok.
Cerise at 9:16PM, Sept. 26, 2006
Happy 100!
Cerise at 9:15PM, Sept. 26, 2006
Happy 100!
Jenshin at 11:59AM, Sept. 26, 2006
Darkened outlines are for the win. I really like the look of this page in general! It's sharp and there's awesome texture going on! Oo.. upward angles are hard to do, aren't they.. Good job. Yay happy page 100!
ejb at 7:57AM, Sept. 26, 2006
Wow! Congratulations on 100 pages! I really like the angle in the first panel. The face came out a tad bit flat, but whatever. The textures of the canvas look great.
AshleeS at 7:11AM, Sept. 26, 2006
Poor Raivyn... Love that yelling shot.
dracco at 2:34AM, Sept. 26, 2006
It REALLY is "ass-kicking time", 'cause this page kicks ass!!! Nice wrk!