Good job hiding the exposition dump a few pages in. It's always a fine line to walk between scaring off readers with a bunch of text or boring them by delaying the plot for 6 months so you can illustrate out all the important world building.
Liking what I've read so far :)
Thanks! I think the infodump thing can work (and is better than spending a ton of pages on nothing) but only if you manage to pull in the reader a bit: for example, a short action scene (3-5 pages) with the protagonists looking cool or something like it and then the infodump. I'm happy you like this story! It was my first webcomic, so you'll see a lot of changes in the drawing style.
TallFroyo at 3:58AM, March 28, 2020
Good job hiding the exposition dump a few pages in. It's always a fine line to walk between scaring off readers with a bunch of text or boring them by delaying the plot for 6 months so you can illustrate out all the important world building. Liking what I've read so far :)
marcorossi at 4:10AM, March 28, 2020
Thanks! I think the infodump thing can work (and is better than spending a ton of pages on nothing) but only if you manage to pull in the reader a bit: for example, a short action scene (3-5 pages) with the protagonists looking cool or something like it and then the infodump. I'm happy you like this story! It was my first webcomic, so you'll see a lot of changes in the drawing style.