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HU: EGO Pg.12 - by ironhand

Nepath on Nov. 20, 2008

News: BffSatan and Qsama contributed new “Watch The Skies” ads! You can take a look at them here and here.

This page's artwork by ironhand (lineart) with a bit of retouch by myself.

Bonus: Please check out this forum thread for some exclusive bonus features (script, layouts, sketches, trivia…) corresponding to the latest comic page.

Commentary: Don't you just hate it when a size-changing superhero invades your auditory canal?

As always, thanks a lot for reading and commenting!

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croxtonhas at 3:53PM, Nov. 24, 2008

ENERGIZE IS BETTER, BUT THIS IS GOOD TOO!

NickGuy at 9:45AM, Nov. 21, 2008

woah i really like that the flea is playing a DK2 Ray Palmer like role here. hope he belly surfs an electron lol

Abt_Nihil at 5:54AM, Nov. 21, 2008

ironhand: No prob, thanks to YOU! legacyhero: The retouching consisted of changing Motherboard's skin and eye color (which ironhand asked me for after sending me his page) and adding some shading on the characters and backgrounds on my own... but not much. So the credit should really go to ironhand. Oh, and I added the little shrink effect in panel 2 :-) alschroeder: As to Motherboard's true nature, please see my reply on page 10. The rest should be clear from taking a look at my script (see the link above). And ironhand's deinitely got a head start compared to me when it comes to human proportions :-)

alschroeder at 5:27AM, Nov. 21, 2008

Well, I guess she is human after all, since she had an auditory canal---but in all honesty, I'm not sure what the small hero (the Flea?) is staring at in the last panel. Ear wax? (but with lightning bolts?) The brain? (In blue, not pink?) The brain, probably. Ironhand, the proportions of your figures are great, very realistic. Yes, your line work and detail need more work, and that will come with time---but you've got the basic proportions for the human (or superhuman) form correct, and I've seen much more polished artists screw that part up, making for a very unbelivable scene. I see a LOT of potential in you.

MrHades at 11:34PM, Nov. 20, 2008

The best way to get better is to keep drawing...and that's what you are doing :) So keep at it!

MrHades at 11:34PM, Nov. 20, 2008

The best way to get better is to keep drawing...and that's what you are doing :) So keep at it!

legacyhero at 11:18PM, Nov. 20, 2008

This is the most completed work that I've ever seen from ironhand. I think the color, and what ever "retouching" was done, helped him deliver a page he should be proud of!

ironhand at 11:12PM, Nov. 20, 2008

A 5 to the story, not the art. Thanks for the assist on this, abt.

AzuJOD at 10:12PM, Nov. 20, 2008

I believe ironhand portrayed Azumorph's powers very well in panel three.

Neilsama at 10:05PM, Nov. 20, 2008

"Charlie Sheen... Ben Vereen... [b]SHRINK TO THE SIZE OF A LIMA BEAN![/b]"