The Last Good-Byes
Chameleon Kid on March 22, 2008
I REALLY HATE the way John and Penny came out in the 3rd panel…=_= (but I'll just have to live with it.) *“fish-eye” comes back to haunt me* (0_0) I'm gonna miss Robin too…Ah well, at least I get to draw Remy and “Marco.” ^_^ And I drew the plane at a different angle! (and it doesn't look horrible.) Meh, I'm not doing too bad then…;p
Chameleon Kid at 2:04PM, March 25, 2008
Thank you for taking the time to look over John Clyde, Japlander! ^_^
n_y_japlander at 9:10AM, March 25, 2008
(-_-) I have seen Amy's rendition of your comic... just never made it over to read yours indepth... Sorry... (^O^) I'm glad I took the time to read some today!!! Nice stuff you have here! I'm coming back for more!!
Chameleon Kid at 6:52AM, March 24, 2008
Yep, I hadda think long and hard about how to do it...(and re-draw numerous times.) ;)
ghostrunner at 3:12AM, March 24, 2008
gotta admit thats one tough perspective in the last panel
ghostrunner at 3:12AM, March 24, 2008
gotta admit thats one tough perspective in the last panel
Chameleon Kid at 12:16PM, March 23, 2008
Kimhura: That's EXACTLY what happens to me! I work so hard on replying to comments and then I get cut off!!! >:{ *stupid effin' thing* Aye, I like having a married couple that have it good--heh, I had actually sorta based them on a couple from a Brit com called "Good Neighbors." Also I took a bit of inspiration from an American comedy called According To Jim. ^_^" I think I've been doing the borders since I went to "big" panels--it's just not overly noticeable because when I shrink 'em I cut 'em down too. *thus reducing the border size* Steely Gaze: Yeah, there really was no way I could possibly make him look better. XD (I just had to have him say that, because this HAS been going on for months now!) *lol* :) Antcomics: Yep, Steely said I couldn't do a plane and that I was gonna mess up--but so far I'm actually finding it easier than a car! :) I've never been able to do characters farther away, but this has made me decide I'm gonna put more effort into it! =/ *loves sarcasm* ^_^'
antcomics at 10:09AM, March 23, 2008
Now, drawing a plane from that vantage point (last panel) would be a bear. Damn, I think you done good. Yeah they look 'sqquatty' in panel three, but you know, I have trouble drawing my characters tiny like that (like you're looking at them from afar) so I can relate. I think the pacing's just great, and yeah I think I detect a little sarcasm on J's part in frame 4...
Steely Gaze at 9:58AM, March 23, 2008
Ha, ha, yeah panel three could use a bit of work. But it still looks better than when you tried to "fix" it. Good work on the plane and the clouds as well; definitely improving. I also like the sly little comment by John in panel four. Yeah, months. :P
Kimhura at 7:04AM, March 23, 2008
My comment got cut off! D8 And I worked so hard on it too x[ *Picks up where it cut off* There aren't many comics starring married couples, let alone married couples that get along. These two are the perfect example of what marriage SHOULD be like 8] Cheer up, John made me crack up in the third panel (Seriously, I was almost crying) xD The same thing happens to me when I try to draw small 8] Also, SINCE WHEN DID THIS COMIC HAVE BORDERS?! D8 *Just noticed* It looks nice ^^
Kimhura at 6:59AM, March 23, 2008
Penny looks like she's going to have a mental breakdown in the first panel xD Awww, John and Penny are so sweet
Chameleon Kid at 5:47AM, March 23, 2008
Yeah...I thought about dragging them out, but this one was written when I was still a bit stumped--I wanted to move the story along because I've got some...interesting...stuff coming up. ;) *grins deviously*
nigbun at 11:05PM, March 22, 2008
Aww LOL This strip seems quite fast though, and I thought the goodbyes would be emotional and long~