Page 13: issue 4 - A Saucerful of Secrets

shastab24 on April 19, 2012

Yep, I'm wrapping the issue up. One more page after this. The funny thing is that I didn't set out to have my issues last about the same amount of pages. It's just happened that way.

Eiderdown's Spanish on this page would probably give a native speaker a headache. It's the problem with Babelfish. I just couldn't reword it. It was supposed to happen earlier, but I put a joke about “telekinetic thrust” and saved the page without an ability to edit properly before I remembered about my plans. This issue was drawn with concepts in mind and not an actual script (unlike the previous three) and so I kind of forgot my intentions at times with the panels. But what is she saying? If I get enough questions, I'll say. It does pertain to her character, and I do consider it worthwhile to know about her, but it is a bit too risque for a T rating (maybe), which was why I put it in Spanish. However, if I actually knew Spanish, I might have made it more understandable.

Tomorrow: Wrapping up the issue