0.04
kjanuary on Feb. 23, 2006
Characters: Max, Telion
Location: Telion's study
I apologize for no page last week. There was some family business that took priority. Thank you all for your patience.
Max won this particular round in the battle of wills. He doesn't make idle threats. But he is offering Telion a pretty nice carrot there… News of his long-absent friend, Kat. (Those who have read the last chapters should remember…) Next page will explain more.
Until then!
Kristen Gudsnuk at 2:09AM, Nov. 17, 2006
the shading around the folds on his pants in the last frame... that blows my mind
kjanuary at 5:01PM, May 21, 2006
You never noticed? XD He (and Joi) have INSANE cowlicks that defy ALL reason or gravity. Holdover from their original designs, I guess. Score one for Max. (I really do keep scorecards on these guys...)
TheQuietOne at 11:16AM, May 21, 2006
Max, strike one. Poor Ter. You know, I'd never noticed before that he had a hair sticking up out of the back of this head. Duck head!
iamthatis at 3:41PM, March 3, 2006
YAY KOH!!!! I didn't know that you were starting at Chpt 1 again! :D But man, you weren't kidding, Max sure is mean. *boo hiss*
kjanuary at 12:04PM, Feb. 24, 2006
Telion has a couch in his study because he wanted a couch. That's all I know. I hope that doesn't tweak your reality too much. guitar: Thanks a lot for your feedback and compliment. I was wondering if you could clarify what you meant about speech bubbles dominating panels, though. Do you mean that the white bubble stands out too much? It's true, I know, but it's hard to work out a dark background with text... and just putting text over a background tends to make it illegible. Was this what you meant, or something else?
Coydog at 10:54AM, Feb. 24, 2006
Heh.. they must've got the sofa at the Kingdom Furniture Warehouse, LOL.
guitar at 10:43AM, Feb. 24, 2006
Very good. I like your cover page. And you have a large variety of value. It look like ink-wash even though it's computerize. Just one thing to keep in mind, don't let your balloons dominate picture. Words balloon should do it job without knowing that it's there. That's my advices.
Love_Peace at 9:33AM, Feb. 24, 2006
I like the pacing of the panels in the comic. It's just goes so smoothly. Can't wait to read more!
Cheeko at 5:40AM, Feb. 24, 2006
Weeeee! Update! ^^
lothar at 5:32AM, Feb. 24, 2006
why do they have a sofa ???
Aywren at 5:09AM, Feb. 24, 2006
Nice use of pacing here to make tension in those first few frames. And oooh... news of Kat. I'm looking forward to seeing how this plays into the future chapters we've already seen.