Page 2: Cafeteria
TheTanman on April 27, 2014
This page I was tryna push my limits. Scenery is freaking hard to draw dude. I keep seeing patterns in my mistakes but quickly being resolved. Another thing thats hard to draw sometimes is wrinkly clothes.Or flowing clothes for that matter. Also I tried coloring this shit, I definetly neeed to work on my photoshop skillz, thats all for now boi.
TakakoJin at 3:16AM, July 1, 2014
Very nice drawings. :) But the panel layout here is off. The natural way to read them the way they are now is top two panels, then BOTH left panels before both right panels. This link may help with your panel layout: http://shawnmccauley.com/news/?p=366 Otherwise good job. Keep up the good work! -TJ
Luccia at 11:41PM, April 27, 2014
No, that's a pretty good lunch room. Scenery is difficult to draw, but you're doing great!