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Plasma_eclipse on March 22, 2009
if you don't get it the spirits eaten by model W have manifested themselfs in Master Albert's body after they see he is dead i'm accepting Cameos BTW oh yeah the blue voice is prometeus the white one is Pandora and the orange one is serpent
Rage Nakasa at 8:46PM, March 23, 2009
whoa
Plasma_eclipse at 5:43PM, March 23, 2009
ettie the reason their floating in nothingness is because well they are next page will show where they actually are and Prometheus,Pandora,and Serpent are spirits at the time we can't see them
Ettie at 5:39PM, March 23, 2009
4 panels- woot! Great easy nice set up for a sprite comic. Ok, uhm... As far as what your comic here needs is that it needs *evil laughter* to be shown not told... I know... That's hard to do with sprites and what not, but its the difference between what makes a sprite comic good, and what makes one great. Next, I'd like to see some enviromental work done in your comic. Incorporating the background with your characters. There's three times of realms of perspective- People v.s themselves (thoughts/opinions/what they think), people v.s people (interactions between 2 people), and people v.s enviroment (people and their placement in their surroundings). You're comic here is lacking that. It's like they're floating around in a black gap of nothingness. Please use backgrounds or atleast give the character's placement in the world you create! Really nice job utilizing effects though. You did an excellent job with effects, and movement as well. I can't wait to see how this comic develops. ^^' sorry for being kinda hard, but I think you can handle it. You're doing great with sprites and putting up with my comics so good luck. I don't have too much to say, there was little errors in the text. The text looked nice and was interesting to read. I like your set up and the title image header you have for your comic. This one is going to turn out real nice.
zt2maniac at 5:38PM, March 23, 2009
i will send my cameo