"NOTE : Please notice me if there's have grammer mistake, I can fix page by that."
Your request for people to tell you about grammer mistakes has grammer error. It should be "Please notify me if there are any grammer mistakes/ I can fix that by page." And in the last panel, the devil stone said "Okay, I thank the once again." That implyed old english. If you were going for that, it should have been "Okay, I thank thee once again." And yes, the second should be there. I didn't write the old english. But if you want to be more modern, it should've been "Okay. Thanks again." You comics get a four for the quality of the english language.
Miguel at 12:26PM, July 13, 2007
"NOTE : Please notice me if there's have grammer mistake, I can fix page by that." Your request for people to tell you about grammer mistakes has grammer error. It should be "Please notify me if there are any grammer mistakes/ I can fix that by page." And in the last panel, the devil stone said "Okay, I thank the once again." That implyed old english. If you were going for that, it should have been "Okay, I thank thee once again." And yes, the second should be there. I didn't write the old english. But if you want to be more modern, it should've been "Okay. Thanks again." You comics get a four for the quality of the english language.
novacrash at 2:23PM, July 12, 2007
The comics still pretty good, but the pink beetle model (I cant remember them name) needs to be a bit reshaded >.o