Chapter One Page 10
D0m on June 16, 2007
Two updates so close together? :O
You guys must feel so special… anyway, this week's page was kind of an experiment on jagged inking and a watercolor style of painting. It actually ended up being one of my (if not THE) best pages. I'd like to know what you think! I'd also like you to tell us where you think the plot is going, either here or in the forum! I left you more clues, and I'm sure some of you will catch up on em!
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I'd like to thank you guys who've been following us/voting/faving/commenting. Up ahead are a lot of explanations for the plotline of the story, so stick with us. Things only get better from here.
Page 11 is:
DONE
katyas at 9:24PM, May 10, 2008
"I wasn't scared, I was just ... regrouping - yes, regrouping. I suddenly remembered something urgent that I needed to do way over here ... suddenly and in an urgent manner that may have RESEMBLED fear ... yeah, yeah, that's the ticket ..."
Frozen Oasis at 4:46AM, Feb. 6, 2008
I think I'm gonna have to add you to my favourites now...
Fitz at 10:42AM, Oct. 16, 2007
Great job on the bottom left panel, her tears look almost real.
simonitro at 11:25AM, Oct. 14, 2007
She's not afraid but I think, she's going to snap and kick the living shit out of spiderwoman!
MrSynnerster at 4:55AM, July 24, 2007
wasn't scared? could have fooled me. lol.
TheMidge28 at 7:50AM, July 21, 2007
Love the rendering of the face in the forth panel
patrickdevine at 9:39PM, July 3, 2007
Not scared? Well, she ought to be!
I heart artists at 6:57PM, June 23, 2007
Wow. Great work.
D0m at 10:58AM, June 23, 2007
[b]Replies[/b] Redemption- Thanks a lot! The next update is coming very soon! Subcultured- Great to see an artists as awesome as yourself stopping by. :-) Ahumphres- Please stop by soon! Glad you like it! Anatak- Thanks so much!! It's gonna get scarier, I hope!
Anatak at 6:25AM, June 23, 2007
Well, I've een following this comic for a while, and now Im faving it, I really like this page.. :)
ahumphres at 12:57PM, June 22, 2007
The mystery of the story is intriguing and the art style certianley sets the mood of the story. I will be checking back for more
subcultured at 8:24AM, June 22, 2007
oooo that's creepy
Redemption at 2:45AM, June 22, 2007
Finally, finally I've got holidays and time to catch up with Nadya! I love your art style, Dom - it has the feel of paint and your lighting is wonderful. The panel transitions flow really smoothly and I'm liking the way you've got the plot motoring away right from the first page. All in all, I'm really enjoying this. I'll keep up with future updates. ^^
Disgruntledrm at 2:00PM, June 20, 2007
I see romance blooming between these two. But then again, I haven't slept in 2 days...
D0m at 12:55PM, June 20, 2007
FAL: You know, I was sitting there feeling lazy, and I didn't think anyone would notice that I wasn't inking the tiles in anymore... You guys don't miss anything. :-) I won't cut corners anymore, hehe. Thanks a lot, man.
FAL at 12:39PM, June 20, 2007
Great! I love the panels with the spider shadow, specially the last one. I don't know if it takes you much more time but I 'd love like to see the stone walls detailed like in page 6, that one was awesome.
D0m at 5:58PM, June 19, 2007
[b]Replies:[/b] Dangerfunk: Charna's true form is going to be a bit bigger and nastier, but right now she's at a point between human and shadow-spider. I'm glad she scares ya! Whirlwynd: Thanks much. Stick around. Fork and Marine: Nope, not really intentional. ;-) I want her to be scary to every reader, though. And, it's great to get comments from you guys- I love Penis (:O ) and Detective Fork. Thanks for reading, and come back soon!
marine at 5:43PM, June 19, 2007
I'll agree with the good Detective, very kafkaesqe, but I doubt that was intentional was it?
DetectiveFork at 4:13AM, June 19, 2007
I am reminded of Kafka for some reason. :)
Whirlwynd at 8:40AM, June 18, 2007
Eerie stuff - story is interesting so far, and I like the lightings you use. I'll be watching -
dangerfunk at 12:51AM, June 18, 2007
I'm plenty scared! I fear spiders, especially ones that burst from elderly women. Is the old lady still transforming? She looks a bit bigger in the last panel.
D0m at 5:46PM, June 17, 2007
Sorry for screwing up the comment replies, guys. I had it all set up and then they somehow got eaten.. I'll try my best to recreate them. This won't happen again! =P Tantz and Charley: Thanks for the analyzation! blnt: I pencilled this by hand, then scanned and did the coloring in photoshop... Kitty: I'm gonna work on redoing the font for the Queen, then... I don't like how the 'I's, turn out!
silentkitty at 5:11PM, June 17, 2007
Looks great, I'm liking the sketchy inking. It lends itself nicely to your coloring style. I also really like how the spider woman (Charna?) is portrayed as just a black silhouette, it makes her look looming and creepy. I think the font you're using for Nadya gets a little bit hard to read at times, especially the capital i's and the s's. (At first glance, I thought "Hells" in the first panel was "Hello", lol.)
D0m at 5:08PM, June 17, 2007
[b]Replies[/b]: Tantz Aerine: You're a sharp reader.
SilverWordz at 2:54PM, June 17, 2007
Great page D0m! It keeps getting better and better.