Chapter One Page 13
D0m on July 6, 2007
Ooh, shiny.
I'm glad I put this page out so quickly- it's all thanks to my decision to take Fridays off.
This took me about a day to finish, and I'm quite proud of it. I stuck with the Joshua Middleton style because of all the great reception I got with page 13. I think the sky and stars, the Queen's glowing face, and the orbs on the bridge were my favorite portions of the page. After I finished, I sat back and looked at it as if it weren't my own- it's a great feeling, and I can sense myself improving.
The Queen has finally been silenced, I never thought I'd see the day! :o) Are there any takers on telling me what that bridge is actually leading to? What's all that green stuff, anyway? And what's with the city?
Same voting incentive this time, since the updates were so close together. Thanks for supporting Nadya! We have much in store for you all!
Replies go here until I can figure out why the comment box is so stupid:
dangerfunk: Not Earth! Although, I never -did- say where the bridge goes to!
I heart artists: You're too kind. :-)
Wyrvvn: Thanks a lot, and KEEP experimenting. I was surprised how far I've come along just by hacking away at Photoshop in my spare time. Learn those hotkeys, kid.
Silverwordz: Thanks! And yes, that is Charna standing there. Wonder what she's doing…? If you want to be let in on a secret, I want to test out an all-painting style sooner or later.
MetalLuigi: It's always nice to see your comments! Hopefully I can top this soon. I actually got this image in my head of the Queen in her fight suit, slouched on a throne and holding her fencing sword with a really “God-I-hate-my-life” look on her face. :-) It'll fit in somewhere.
And in answer to your question, I -can- feel myself getting better. Trust me, I'm pretty shocked at how far I've come. Whoever said practice makes perfect wasn't fooling around.
Tantz: Love your comments!
JoeRocks1981: Thanks, hehe… :=P
Crave the Bullet: That's one of the reasons I wish I could keep it up here and not go on to the less-pretty page… Ah, well. Welcome, anyway!
Krimblade: I love that word myself! Glad you're using it to describe Nadya. :-P
Huffy the Bandit: Yeah, I pretty much did this 10% pencil, 90% Photoshop. You shouldn't settle for -just- Powerpoint. Invest in a tablet and Photoshop…
DueEast- Thanks a lot!
PatrickDevine- Yeah, I installed moon two on a whim! I think the city is crooked because I originally thought it was in relation to the bridge, or something… If I get time, I may fix that. Thanks for bringing it up!
Matchhead, Darkman and Witt: Glad you like it!
SilentKitty: Great to know that you like it, too. All of this because of comics like PT showing me that I should settle for nothing but the best. I'm gonna try to have some consistency in her face.
Bloodharlot: Come back soon!
FAL: Coming from you, I know I did something right! Sometime, you should teach me to make that awesome lineart you do… :-P
Lothar- Not as long as you'd think!
Hyptosis at 12:39PM, July 10, 2007
great work, keep it up!
cameron11691 at 6:47AM, July 10, 2007
Fantastic work
Meleeanna at 4:08AM, July 10, 2007
It's so pretty >.>.
lothar at 6:01PM, July 9, 2007
WOW !!! badass city there ! that dude on the bridge has a long walk ahead of him !
newgirlcomic at 11:32AM, July 9, 2007
awesome comic!
marine at 5:55AM, July 9, 2007
This is a damn fine page.
JillyFoo at 9:55PM, July 8, 2007
this IS really nice!
FAL at 3:52PM, July 8, 2007
Holy cow man, you've nailed it with this and your last page! Please keep up this level. I tell you that face is just perfect!
Lughaidh at 3:22PM, July 8, 2007
Fivetastic!
Imah at 1:48PM, July 8, 2007
awesome O_O
thebloodharlot at 6:30AM, July 8, 2007
Wow, I am DEFINITELY keeping watch of this *,*
silentkitty at 9:55PM, July 7, 2007
Wow, that was unexpected, haha. O_O Very very nice page, I agree that this is probably the best page you've done so far. Her face is just great in that top panel, and the city is wonderful! Keep it up ^^
The World of Witt at 8:41PM, July 7, 2007
Well that's just breathtaking! Wow.
Darkmax at 2:10PM, July 7, 2007
STUNNING!!!!
Matchhead1984 at 12:25PM, July 7, 2007
Great face! Its amazing. Love the colors.
patrickdevine at 11:03AM, July 7, 2007
Wow, what a beautifully drawn face! The cityscape is pretty amazing too (I LOVE skybridges!) I also like how there's two moons. The building on the right looks a bit lopsided though.
Anatak at 10:32AM, July 7, 2007
My favorite page so far
dueeast at 8:12AM, July 7, 2007
This is a great page! The details and the colors and the lighting, the expression on her face, the overall subtleness is very refreshing, especially in a webcomic. Top notch!
Huffy the Bandit at 5:14AM, July 7, 2007
Hey thanks for the comment, I like the shading on her face and how the background kinda fades out, I'm guessing you scan your drawing and use a program to color it and stuff, i wish i knew how to do all that but sadly I can only use microsoft powerpoint.
KrimBlade at 5:01AM, July 7, 2007
Many words can be used to describe this masterpiece, and I'll use... 'wicked'.
Crave The Bullet at 4:42AM, July 7, 2007
This is an amazing page to come in on first.
joerocks1981 at 3:48AM, July 7, 2007
lordy. wow.
Tantz_Aerine at 3:26AM, July 7, 2007
One of your best pages by far. I had written out a nice little paragraph, but the site ate it. Drat. Anyway, her face is vibrant and alive, and I can feel her breath sort of dying in her throat as she looks upon the eerie and overwhelming setting. Its scope is excellently rendered. Very well done, and an excellent way to introduce us to a better realisation of this new reality. :) Keep it up! This is definitely a style that fits you.
MetalLuigi at 11:06PM, July 6, 2007
Wow...now THIS is definitely the best page you've ever done. It just looks fantastic! Everything from the queen's facial features to the background is awesome. And to think this was done so close to the last update. You're really getting good at this, aren't you?
SilverWordz at 11:02PM, July 6, 2007
PS... is that Charna on the bridge?