Chapter One Page 14
D0m on July 13, 2007
Well, I had to leave my favorite page sooner or later. I can't tell you how much I frustrated with this page. Next page is finally some sort of explanation. Sorry for the eyesore font!
Anyway, I left a big clue as to the kind of world we're looking at. Check out the third panel. What does the malfunction mean? Why is there a drastic change of scenery in where Charna's standing and where they began? Thoughts?
Thanks for all the comments of page 13, you guys couldn't be more supportive. And I plan on sticking with that style as much as possible from now on!
This week's voting incentives are WIPs of one painting I finished and one that's still in progress!
Vote for Nadya at TWC and see the rest of this painting of the most gorgeous girl in the world, Ariel: 
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Page 15 is:
60% Scripted
0% Pencilled
0% Inked
0% Colored
By the way, Nadya just broke into the top 100 of comic book/story! Thanks, you all!
Lughaidh at 12:09PM, July 14, 2007
I like panels 5 and 6, the profiles facing away but talking towards eachother... it's visually neat.
D0m at 12:07PM, July 14, 2007
Drunkduck ate my comments... -again-. Anyway, GinckPress and Legendkiller, welcome to Nadya! DueEast- Charna's gonna be a bit less mysterious starting with the next page, and the Queen will continue to be arrogant. Is she a likeable character at all? Silentkitty- Thanks to artists like you, I know who to look up to! I like looking back to see my improvement, too. I'm pretty much approaching what I finally want the comic to look like, though. =) Puff- Such kind words! Top 10? I think I'm gonna faint!! Nepath- Go on, take a guess! And, I want Nadya to stay an unpredictable comic. Perhaps that'll keep anyone interested in coming back!
D0m at 10:24AM, July 14, 2007
Tera- Thanks!
Nepath at 9:39AM, July 14, 2007
Nice page, although im not ready to hazard a guess the the plot yet thought...
Puff at 9:09AM, July 14, 2007
I'm really really enjoying this comic, D0m. You're doing an excellent job at it, really! You deserve to be in the top 100, and I can't wait for the day Nadya's even in the top 10. :)
silentkitty at 8:17AM, July 14, 2007
It's amazing how much progress you're making so quickly! Flipping back between this and your first page, it's like watching years of improvement happening in a few months, lol. Really nice work. ^^
dueeast at 7:07AM, July 14, 2007
I like what you're continuing to do with this page, the colors, the scenery, the story and just the detail of the work. I like the strange personality of the "guardian" and I'm still cringing at the snobbish arrogance of the main character. Good job!
legendkiller13 at 6:58AM, July 14, 2007
great looking page
I heart artists at 6:15AM, July 14, 2007
Captivating.
D0m at 5:20AM, July 14, 2007
Dangerfunk- Ah, the third was actually my favorite, but it's cool if you like those, too. ;-) In the third panel, it's an airship, but you just gave me a -wicked- idea... Joerocks- Hehe, I'll be working on it! BLNT- Thanks a lot, glad you're still with me! Vindibudd- Thanks, I actually had to cut it down because the text was suffocating. FAL- Nope, not a hologram! Think about distance, and how long it takes to walk to different cities and worlds- wouldn't it be easier to have something to speed it up?
FAL at 2:44AM, July 14, 2007
So the city is an hologram... maybe not. I know, just wait 'till the next page, right? :)
Vindibudd at 12:11AM, July 14, 2007
Love the 5th panel.
blntmaker at 11:45PM, July 13, 2007
Still fabulous and a suspenseful pace of storytelling! Nicely done, D0m!
joerocks1981 at 10:56PM, July 13, 2007
very unexpected, DOm. That next page needs to get done faster. :)
dangerfunk at 10:27PM, July 13, 2007
I like the last two panels. They have a very "The Scream"- like composition to them, if that makes any sense... In the third panel, is that an airship or a dragon with a nuke strapped on its back? Either would be just awesome!