Chapter One Page 21
D0m on Sept. 18, 2007
Sorry it took so long to update, guys! I think Nadya will now be moving onto a bi-weekly update status until I can learn to spend my time more wisely. Just out of curiosity, would you guys like to have the meter showing the progress of the next page?
About three pages left in the chapter! Thanks for sticking around.
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Thanks for everyone who checks up and comments on Nadya regularly. You keep me doing what I love.
katyas at 7:31AM, May 11, 2008
Nadya is the Queen - of the sneers! I mean, she could teach Billy Idol a thing or two, and he was a master sneer-er! Wow ...
Fitz at 11:20AM, Oct. 16, 2007
I like the little bit of humor, based on the chemistry between the characters. Charna's obviously sick of our little Queenie. On a side note, did you actually switch to bi-weekly? I update every two weeks. One week I work on the comic, the other I'm lazy, maybe write something in the weekend.
simonitro at 12:00PM, Oct. 14, 2007
"STOP YOUR DAMN EXCUSES, OLD LADY!"
jissai at 11:09PM, Oct. 2, 2007
such an impaciant(sp?) woman.. KILL THE @*%$
SilverWordz at 12:47PM, Sept. 27, 2007
Wee, finally found a chance to catch up.
mlai at 11:13AM, Sept. 27, 2007
Hey, the bg lines are much cleaner in this page. Organic settings suit your methods better. Did this elevator go down... or up...?
RabbitMaster at 3:22AM, Sept. 24, 2007
Yeah! Finally more Nadya!
Reveta at 3:09AM, Sept. 23, 2007
Wonderful ^^ I love the coloring to :)
joerocks1981 at 9:19AM, Sept. 22, 2007
thanks again, dom. the stairs remind me of a scene in ghostbusters for some reason. Ray: "Hey, where do these stairs go?" Peter: "...They go up." i know it wasn't supposed to. i was just sayin.
slimredninja at 1:25AM, Sept. 20, 2007
Great comic love the art and the story is especially good
Wyrvvn at 4:19PM, Sept. 19, 2007
Nice, slim, and refreshing to look at. :D Good job again, my friend.
Tantz_Aerine at 1:52PM, Sept. 19, 2007
I like the lighting in this, as well as the expressions. :) Well done! And I am intrigued that Charna doesn't want to be seen in her shadow form all of a sudden.
KellyMarie at 1:43PM, Sept. 19, 2007
More paintings! I want more paintings!
JustNoPoint at 12:40PM, Sept. 19, 2007
Really like the silhouette of her transforming at the end. Can't wait to see some stuff finally explained!
VegaX at 8:24AM, Sept. 19, 2007
Sometimes the backgrounds seem a bit rushed and sketchy, but i really like the cave and stairs bg in this one.
jmt at 8:18AM, Sept. 19, 2007
I like her little snear in frame 4. Sweet facial expression.
TheMidge28 at 7:21AM, Sept. 19, 2007
Dom...I really enjoy the piecemeal delivery of the story...adds to the suspense but at the same time leaves me hungry...get it...piece meal...anyways...I want more...Its like watching Usual Suspects or Snatch and stopping 10-15 mins into it and waiting a week and now 2 weeks to find out what happened and and to watch another 10-15...argh...but that works though because you want to find out what happens...like old radio serials...all that to say another great page and and top notch mysterious story-telling as always!!!!
silentkitty at 6:26AM, Sept. 19, 2007
Looks nice Dom, I really like the work you did on the stone stairs and walls, they look nice and textured, especially in the first panel. ^^
gsp at 6:10AM, Sept. 19, 2007
Really nice DOm, great continuity.
Lughaidh at 5:23AM, Sept. 19, 2007
Panel 2 = Gold.
Loud_G at 5:19AM, Sept. 19, 2007
Beautiful job as always. I love how you always leave us wondering what will happen next. You have an excellent mood created and you are a natural at suspense. :D
polo at 5:08AM, Sept. 19, 2007
Nice! That background in the first panel is amazing!
D0m at 4:31AM, Sept. 19, 2007
Dueast- Thanks again! Chapter two'll be a pace you won't be so used to, coming from me! And I'll be working on your fanart soon! MetalLuigi- Charna has a lot of control. Thanks for stopping by, and you'll see that she has a reason for what she's doing. DAJB- Yes! Means I got my point across! BLNT- Well, Charna's going through a few changes. :-) Skyangel- Nadya's no pushover! It's why I love her, hehe. Nepath- Thanks! HarryQ- I'm glad you like them! Sometimes I fear I overdo it, hehe.. StabbyFairy- Thanks. I never want to substitute quality for speed in this comic.
stabbyfairy at 4:03AM, Sept. 19, 2007
Aaaw, Charna's sick. =( Lovely art again. I really do enjoy the glowiness you give everything, it gives the setting such a great ambience.
harryq at 3:50AM, Sept. 19, 2007
I continue to be spellbound by the subtle facial expressions.