skyangel at 12:52PM, Oct. 10, 2023

I love this idea of the fog, it's all the more unsettling being as they are on an alien planet and can't see what's around them and it creates a quietness too which tends to make you more aware of your own noise making. This story would make a great movie.

plymayer at 1:46AM, Sept. 28, 2023

DOn't care for the long stairs. Way too high.

bravo1102 at 12:16AM, Sept. 28, 2023

Very much so and don't let anyone tell you otherwise.