Ch2 Pg22
Cheeko on April 3, 2006
Let's take a moment and think about the situation.
We've got a small, thin and dirty looking boy.
We've also got two very large, very muscular, very mad, and very old guardsmen, one unarmed.
The little boy HAD a stick… he broke it on one of the bigger guard's faces.
Now… WHO do you think is going to win?
Yeah… all the stories Amidon's been tellin' are a bit exaggerated. Now we find it out the hard way.
My apologies to those of you who were expecing Redeye to kick their butts. But I promise you greater fights in the future. On my honor.
The next two pages are completely done. This doesn't mean I'm off my vacation, though.
Also: I changed something major on page 9. I'd just like to point that out. It just goes better with what I have planned.
I like panel three. The expression is just really satisfying.
CREDITS!
–The GRASS in the background on this one was Ozoneocean's idea! Visit his comic Pinky TA (http://www.drunkduck.com/Pinky_TA)
–The PUDDLES OF WATER and BROKEN GLASS(the word balloons kind of cover them up) are taken out of Wazaga's (http://www.drunkduck.comEver_Hollow) extensive list on a previous page
–And the BARREL was just my idea. XP
Cheeko out.
parry_lost at 1:44PM, April 5, 2008
So they're agents Jay and Kay of the City Guard? :-P Hehe, I just felt the need to point that out.
Wazaga at 9:21PM, April 4, 2006
uh oh....
Aussie_kid at 8:36PM, April 4, 2006
Exaggeration always leads to disappointment
JillyFoo at 7:25PM, April 4, 2006
That's one mean looking shovel!
magicalmisfits at 7:19PM, April 4, 2006
Hee hee yeah
Fyrsiel at 5:03PM, April 4, 2006
*UPDATE YAAAAY!* xD Dx ... NOOOOOOOO! Aw man... you just can't trust those voices... they always get people into trouble. ;___; Very realistic. xO That poor kid will be so confused...
iagojester at 3:29PM, April 4, 2006
damn the man! Colors seem all sorts of blurry on this page. I know it's for movement, but still... odd.
pv_chan at 3:15PM, April 4, 2006
uh oh! it's all over now! ~PV
mjkj at 3:10PM, April 4, 2006
Wow unexpected but great :) mjkj
Aywren at 2:54PM, April 4, 2006
Oops. Here's the rating. Sorry! ^^;;
Aywren at 2:54PM, April 4, 2006
All I can say is.. Uh oh... And good for you for sticking to the realism you know should be there! I think that makes for a far more believable story, honestly. And it does your characters justice in the long run, too.