Ch2 Pg53
Cheeko on Oct. 8, 2006
What did I tell you? I new page.
I only wish I could make that fifth panel look more magicky. All I had for the sparkles was that Star brush in photoshop, and they look really tacky.
I like the fourth panel.
Am I making the panels too dark? Let me know if so.
Heehee… that rhymed.
Marie's face looks waaay too elongated in that third panel. I'm pretty positive it's the hair that does it.
Also, a lot of reference was used in that second to last one, specifically from Hawk's comic “Culture Shock.” (http://www.drunkduck.com/Culture_Shock/)
Man, I couldn't believe it. Right when I was trying to figure out how to color a page with a bright light/spell source Hawk just goes ahead and posts one. (He did a much better job, though.) Thanks, dude!
I got a D- on my first calculus test, so I'm a bit bummed. I hate math.
Cheeko out.
jiminycricketX at 3:49PM, Feb. 5, 2007
I did the expresiion on Kavin's face in the last panel. I'll have to do him if I ever get assigned to you in a MAX round. Or maybe I'll do an adoption art pic of him.
Jassination at 10:17AM, Dec. 15, 2006
I think her face looks fine. ;) Looks like Kavin is quite concerned with Marie...
Sly Eagle at 9:08PM, Oct. 12, 2006
Silly Kavin. I swear, there's a rule somewhere that men in love cannot do intelligent things...
ce33 at 2:10PM, Oct. 12, 2006
Awww, don't hate math...better luck next time.
JillyFoo at 9:36AM, Oct. 12, 2006
Who won the contest?
Ninja_Jette at 3:26AM, Oct. 12, 2006
I hate math too! grrr!
br4nzilla at 12:33AM, Oct. 12, 2006
I love your expressions! And those dark panels aren't too dark. They're brilliant!
Hawk at 10:44PM, Oct. 10, 2006
Neat! My comic helped somebody a little! I like how the elf lady looks. Seems like she operates a lot like the Jedi when it comes to getting people to do what she wants. That fourth panel is my favorite, though. The look and pose of that creature is COOL.
iamthatis at 7:45PM, Oct. 10, 2006
*luvs second panel*
emjee at 9:14PM, Oct. 9, 2006
Whoa she does look like Zelda! cool.
mjkj at 11:57AM, Oct. 9, 2006
Great =D Yeah the panels are a bit too dark (it is better if you look at them with a tft display than with a plain old monitor =( ) mjkj
kjanuary at 6:47AM, Oct. 9, 2006
These people need walkie-talkies.
Knuckles at 4:57AM, Oct. 9, 2006
Sleep spell? XD
Joff at 4:13AM, Oct. 9, 2006
Looks good to me ^_^
magicalmisfits at 1:37AM, Oct. 9, 2006
Very awsome and freind Fyrsiel's comments are very useful to me. You dont need it IMO But I am certainlly going to use the advice back at MM
Fyrsiel at 10:47PM, Oct. 8, 2006
xD Also, something important to consider is this: The basic colors of magic, your light blue here, must be brushed on lightly. With your brush at maybe something like 20 or so, sprayed onto the page a few times. The white spots there, would go all the way up to 80 or even 100. But you keep all white spots inside a spray of color... okay I'mma be quite now. ^ ^;;
Fyrsiel at 10:43PM, Oct. 8, 2006
Well, the magic doesn't look that bad... although I think I'm not too great at noticing "tacky" things. Dx ;;; *so...* Magic is the best of fun. With one color, spray all over the place. Then with a dramatically lighter color (possibly even white) make smaller sprays in all the previously placed colors. Light is tricky... there must be subtle changes in its "brightness" otherwise it looks cloudy... Here, though, your magic doesn't look that bad. xO In time you'll figure it out fer sher.
JillyFoo at 10:05PM, Oct. 8, 2006
she looks like zelda. I approve. Who is the guy in the last panel??? is it someone we know??