Ch2 Pg56
Cheeko on Oct. 25, 2006
Well, HEY! Look at this! An early update!
A lot, a TON of people were really confused with the posting of the last page, and I think without reading my latest blurb no one would have known what was going on.
Many, MANY thank yous to Cheypeta, Mistylake, Iamthatis, Fyrsiel, and Adariel for giving me some great ideas for Marie's disease. I ended up combining a little bit of each one to make one big illness.
IS EVERYONE FOLLOWING THE STORY OKAY??? Is it difficult to know WHAT IS GOING ON??? I NEED TO KNOW!
I cannot stress this enough. If you are confused or if the storyline isn't making any sense YOU NEED TO TELL ME!! I hate comics where you're left confused and wondering what the heck is happening. If we're going to go anywhere with this we need to be confusion free throughout the entire thing. That's why I made this page; to clear up any confusion that might be happening.
For those of you wondering who the heck Crysthel is talking to, see The Prologue for more info.
*mad at herself*
I like how the lighting came out on the first elf, but I like the design of the second much better. She's supposed to be biting her lip, but it only looks like she's got a weird mouth. Meh.
Gotta go, class. Yey!
Cheeko out.
Jassination at 10:23AM, Dec. 15, 2006
Yeah, I'm confused in what they're after... No, wait, I just forgot what they're after. Some kind of artifact... What it does may be something I didn't forget. :D No, wait, I probably did. :|
Fyrsiel at 5:10PM, Oct. 31, 2006
Aaaah this page makes everything clear now. xD Very well done on the glowy-ness. : D
Ninja_Jette at 8:40AM, Oct. 30, 2006
waaaaaaaaah beautiful page
Adariel at 6:45PM, Oct. 29, 2006
pretty good combination i guess
Wrenmisty at 2:52PM, Oct. 27, 2006
I like the shadow of Crysthel in the corner. ^^ This is probably weird, but I like it when there's elements or parts of a story I don't completely understand. It makes me feel that the story has more depth.
mjkj at 2:47PM, Oct. 27, 2006
=D
Xaam at 6:14PM, Oct. 26, 2006
The storyline is very interesting, but it's been a little jumbled lately. I can't really describe it... I read ALL of your updates, let me just put that out there. I love this comic. But I'm not sure just what is going on right now. I was following all of it...the characters in prison, the little street gang. The world they all occupate...the tragic sacrifice of Jon in the beginning. But ever since we've been following these new characters, the ones in hoods, it's been confusing. I just don't understand it...are they fighting these military people? Who is this elf girl who is healing people and why the heck did a man just bust down a door to see her? What happened to that blue haired captain guy? Wasn't his squad doing something? I'm just confused...I'm going to go back and reread the past two chapters, maybe it will clear some things up. More than likely, all confusion is just a product of unrevealed plot devices. I'm sure that all will be revealed in time. I, as a reader and avid fan, have complete faith in your ability to tell and weave this story and I trust that any mystery in your storyline is intentional. If nothing else, please don't be discouraged by my "just not getting it". It's no indicator that you aren't being clear enough, it's just an indicator that we aren't on the same page as the creator and fan (yes, pun intended). Happy drawings, and much thanks for the early update. Can't wait to see these questions answered...hmm...what WOULD my one question be??... ;) (PS: Beautiful artwork, bar none, as always!)
Aywren at 3:35PM, Oct. 26, 2006
I'm understanding -- no worries here. Just want more story. ^_~
iamthatis at 11:32AM, Oct. 26, 2006
"Do not know or remember disease"? Iiiinteresting. :3 I didn't have any trouble following, but if the result of confusion is this page, then I'm glad!
Wazaga at 10:18AM, Oct. 26, 2006
I wasn't confused at all, in fact, I was sorta looking foward to how you were going to explain the mistery later on... gee, that was fast 0_o
JillyFoo at 8:59AM, Oct. 26, 2006
That's why I love drunk duck so much. instant feedback so these kinda explaino pages can be made in response.
Draco109 at 8:32AM, Oct. 26, 2006
easy Cheeko, I said I was a bit slow anyway. I'm not what you'd call "the sharpest tool in the shed" just because I'm kinda stupid doesn't mean you're not doing an outstanding job! (which you ARE doing) I just missed something a while back.
dracco at 8:15AM, Oct. 26, 2006
Great page! Really awesome art! Will try to catch up with the story...
kjanuary at 7:26AM, Oct. 26, 2006
Okay. I'm following everything up until who's talking on this page. Obviously Crysthel is explaining... but who's asking her the questions? Is she telling the story of 1Q to someone and I missed that?
Knuckles at 7:22AM, Oct. 26, 2006
I'm following and understanding the comic well so far :O