Chapter 2: Page 5

Vendrus Sci on April 26, 2007

Read either one side or the other all together first; the halves of the page happen simultaneously in different places.
Raven finally gets a name, Hawk plays with fire, (a lot, get used to it ^^;) and the happening stuff I promised at the start of this chapter… actually starts happening.

Hee, I've also just hit the 80,000 word mark on the original written version of this.

Evil_Snuffkin: Thanks - this is my first attempt at actually drawing in backgrounds rather than just shading-sketching. Works much better, methinks.