Chapter 1 Page 4
stabbyfairy on June 17, 2007
Since I'm so new at this, I obviously need a lot of work. As such, constructive criticism, pointers, etc are very much welcomed. It's easy to see I need them. =O_O=
stabbyfairy on June 17, 2007
Since I'm so new at this, I obviously need a lot of work. As such, constructive criticism, pointers, etc are very much welcomed. It's easy to see I need them. =O_O=
stabbyfairy at 11:47AM, Aug. 9, 2007
Yeah, I been working on that. Chapter 2's better and 3 (I'm working on it right now) is INFINITELY more readable. I was a lazy newbie this chapter. XD
snark at 6:34AM, Aug. 9, 2007
Constructive criticism? Well...guess the panels could use a bit more clarity, I had to read through the middle ones a couple of times to figure out what was happening